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六 情景作文:人生哲理类(成功因素)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying“The most successful persons may not be the smartest ones.”You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

(一)预测范文

According to a survey conducted among a group of people who studied at the same university 10 years ago, the majority of those with grade point averages in the middle 50% became wealthy or emerged as top performers in various fields. In contrast, the majority of those ranked in the top 10% ultimately demonstrated mediocre performance.

One of the many factors contributing to the above phenomenon is good interpersonal communication skills. A wide circle of friends can provide information and resources, increasing your chances of success. On the contrary, if you are highly competent in your expertise, but have difficulty getting along with colleagues or even your boss, it will be challenging for you to survive in the company. In today s world, in addition to strong professional skills and good interpersonal communication skills, the ability to express yourself is extremely important. The larger the company you are in and the fiercer the competition, the more important it is for you to know how to express your ideas and convince others.

To sum up, according to my observation, outstanding academic performance constitutes only one aspect of achieving success, while other factors play equally significant roles.

(二)参考译文

根据一项调查,十年前在同一所大学上学的一群人中,那些平均学分处于中间50%的学生大部分都变得富有,或者成为不同领域的佼佼者。相比之下,那些(平均学分)处于前10%的学生大部分最终却表现平平。

造成上述现象的诸多因素之一就是良好的人际交往能力。广泛的朋友圈可以提供信息和资源,让你成功的机会更大。相反,如果你在专业技能上很有能力,但是很难和同事甚至老板和谐相处,那么你就很难在公司中生存。在当今世界,除了过硬的专业技能和良好的人际交往能力,表达自我的能力也极其重要。你所处的公司越大,竞争越激烈,知道如何表达你的想法并使别人信服的能力也就显得越发重要。

总之,根据我的观察,学习优秀只是造就成功的一个方面,其他因素也起着同样重要的作用。

(三)亮点词汇

conduct 组织,实施

majority 大部分

grade point average 平均学分

emerge 出现

in contrast 相比之下

ultimately 最终

mediocre 普通的,平庸的

interpersonal 人际的

on the contrary 相反

competent 有能力的

expertise 专业技能

in addition to 除……以外(还有)

convince 使信服

observation 观察

outstanding 优秀的

academic performance 学业表现

constitute 组成,构成

aspect 方面

significant 重要的

(四)道长点评

六级写作已经多次考查“人生哲理”这一话题,如:2020-9:Wealth of the Mind Is the Only True Wealth(思想财富是唯一真正的财富);2017-12:Respect Others, and You Will Be Respected(尊重别人,你也会受到尊重);2014-6:Do Not Judge Others by Appearance(不要以貌取人)。

(五)句型拓展

There is plenty of strong evidence that friendship can help to tide you over a period of difficulty. 大量有力的证据表明,友谊能帮助你渡过难关。

② Why do those students who are not outstanding academically tend to become managers or own their own businesses later in life? 为什么那些在学业上不出众的学生以后反而容易成为经理或拥有自己的企业呢?

③ And what factors lead to success in both career and life if intelligence is not the only answer? 如果智力不是唯一的答案,那什么因素带来了事业和生活上的成功呢? 7fXNLb8oRURO16r7Z4ZhhN/eNYI1qKKeXl+ZxlvgA9oLpcZ6pif5i1TZbLsXy4Mg

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