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本题的图表传达了两个核心信息，一是扩建前后入住度假村家庭数量的对比，二是游客对度假村喜好情况的对比。分段方面可以在第一段改写题目，说明图表的核心信息，之后在第二段说明表格中的信息，第三段和第四段分别对两个饼图进行具体描述。
第一段：改写题目，注意对题目描述中的表达进行同义替换。
第二段：说明表格中的信息，也就是入住度假村家庭数量的变化，同时需要注意，由于本段还起到概述的作用，因此也需要总体说明饼图的情况，这里简单说明用户喜好的调查显示出了不同的结果即可。
第三段：后面两段主要说明两个饼图的内容，其中本段重点描写扩建前的情况，这里需要考生具有对单个饼图进行描述的能力，可以按照占比从大到小的顺序依次描写。
第四段：本段主要写扩建后人们对度假村喜好的变化情况，与第三段相同的是，这都是对单个图的描述，不同的是，由于涉及前后两个时间段，因此描述具体数字时，需要与第一个饼图进行对比。
The information in the table and charts shows the differences in the number of families staying in a resort before and after expansion, and the results of surveys asking visitors which aspect of the resort they liked the most.
After the expansion, the number of families staying at the resort significantly increased from 125,000 to 178,000, and there were also notable [1] differences in the preference survey results over the period.
Before the expansion, 48% of families believed the rooms to be the best feature of the resort, followed by [2] the food, which 24% of the families liked best. 16% said they favoured the entertainment, while 12% voted for the service.
It appears that [3] after the expansion there were noticeable changes in how customers felt about the resort's best features. The rooms were not as popular before, falling from 48% to 30%, but entertainment was more popular and voted as the best feature now by 30% of visitors, almost twice as popular as before. The service also went up to more than double the popularity, and the food witnessed a decline in popularity by 9%.
[1] notable意思是“值得注意的，显著的”，与下文中的noticeable是近义词。
[2] followed by相当于and this was followed by，意为“紧跟着的是……”，用来连接两个相邻的数据。
[3] It appears that ... 意为“显然，看起来……”，用于引出下文。
[4] 本文的另一语言亮点是用不同方式表达“受欢迎”和“不受欢迎”：
受欢迎
1) 48% of families believed the rooms to be the best feature of the resort
2) ... the food, which 24% of the families liked best
3) 16% said they favoured the entertainment
4) 12% voted for the service
5) entertainment was more popular and voted as the best feature now by 30% of visitors
6) The service also went up to more than double the popularity
不受欢迎
1) The rooms were not as popular before
2) the food witnessed a decline in popularity by 9%
图表中的信息显示了扩建前后入住度假村家庭数量的差异，以及询问游客最喜欢度假村哪一点的调查结果。
扩建后，入住该度假区的家庭数量从12.5万户显著增加到17.8万户，同期的喜好调查结果也有显著差异。
在扩建之前，48%的家庭认为客房是度假村的最大亮点，其次是食物：24%的家庭最喜欢这里的食物。16%的人表示他们喜欢这里的娱乐项目，12%的人投票支持这里的服务。
扩建后，顾客对度假村亮点的看法似乎发生了明显变化。客房不再像以前那样受欢迎，支持率从48%下降到30%，但娱乐项目更受欢迎了，有30%的游客将它视为最大亮点，受欢迎程度是之前的两倍。度假村服务的受欢迎程度也提高了一倍以上，食物的受欢迎程度下降了9%。
本题的表格对比了两个年龄组被指控犯罪的比例情况，第二张图对比了他们具体被指控犯罪类型的比例。文章可以在首段说明两张图表的主题；第二段的overview除了说明第一张表中的比例之外，还可以说明在第二张图中体现出的犯罪类型的共性；之后的两个段落可以用来对第二张图进行具体分析，说明两个年龄组被指控犯罪类型的区别。
第一段：说明图表的主题，注意对题目中的关键信息进行改写。
第二段：说明图表的最显著特征，其中第一张表展示了32%和9%的对比，第二张图则可以说明两个年龄组的共性，即他们最常被指控的犯罪类型是damage to property。
第三段：具体说明两个年龄组被指控犯罪类型的区别，本段和第四段可以根据两个年龄组被指控比例的情况来分类，即本段说明年长组被指控比例更高的犯罪类型，如drink driving、petty theft等。
第四段：本段说明年轻组被指控比例更高的犯罪类型，也就是damage to property和assault，此外，这个年龄组的人被误告的可能性也更大。
The charts compare [1] the percentage of 2 different age groups charged with crimes and the crimes they committed in a city in 2017.
The charts show that the older age group (26–35 year olds) were charged with more than 3 times more crimes than [2] the younger age group (18–25 year olds), 32% contrasted with [3] just 9%, and that the most common offence [4] for both age groups to be charged with was damage to property.
There are some clear differences between the younger and [5] older age groups. The older group were twice as likely to be charged for drink driving than the younger age group – 26% compared to around 13%. They also showed higher rates of [6] petty theft, sexual offences, and ‘other’ crimes.
However, the younger age group were more likely to [7] commit damage to property (around 37%) and assault (24%), as well as being around 4% more likely to be falsely charged [8] than the older age group.
[1] compare在没有时间变化的图形中往往只是对比数据，compare用在本文开头段很准确。
[2] A is 3 times more than B是常见的比较句型，在本句中，be charged with crimes被拆分，变成A were charged with more than 3 times more crimes than B，增加了句子的灵动感，同样的句子还出现下一段：The older group were twice as likely to be charged for drink driving than the younger age group ...。
[3] ... contrasted with ... 用来对比两个数据，下一段出现的26% compared to around 13%同为此意，可用来代替26% and 13% respectively，避免重复。
[4] the most common offence 最常见的犯罪
[5] There are some clear differences between A and B A和B之间有明显的不同
[6] They also showed higher rates of ... 他们在……方面也呈现了很高的占比（犯罪率高的另一种表述）
[7] be more likely to do sth. 很有可能做某事（表示极大可能性）
[8] be falsely charged 被诬告
这两个图比较了2017年一个城市中两个不同年龄群体被指控犯罪的比例和他们所犯的罪行。
图表显示，年长组（26岁~35岁）被指控犯罪数量是年轻组（18岁~25岁）的3倍以上，32%与9%形成了鲜明对比，而对这两个年龄段的人来说，最常被指控的罪行是损坏财物。
年轻组和年长组之间有一些明显的区别。年长组酒后驾车被控告的比例是年轻组的两倍，比例分别为26%和13%。此外，他们的偷窃行为、性侵犯以及“其他类型”犯罪行为的发生率更高。
然而，年轻组损坏财物（37%左右）和袭击他人（24%）的比例更高，同时与年长组相比，年轻组被误告的可能性大约高出4％。
本题由一个线图和一个表格构成。线图描绘了1998年至2004年人们工作时间的分布情况，表格显示了同一时期人们带薪年假的天数。均含多个时间，有趋势变化。在分段方面，第一段可以介绍图表的大致内容。第二段是概述段，总结图表中最核心的信息。第三和第四段分别描述线图和表格的细节信息。
第一段：改写题干信息，注意在开头段中使用的同义或近义表达。
第二段：概述两个图表中最核心的信息：线图中两升一降（工作时间为16小时~31小时和32小时~45小时的人群增多，工作时间超过45小时的人群减少），带薪年假的天数逐年递增。
第三段：描述线图信息，在主体段中要描写具体趋势和数据，重点学习如何表达趋势及添加对应的数字。
第四段：描述表格信息。虽然年份较多，但其趋势明显，内容并不复杂，所以本段的词数相较第三段略少一些。
The line graph depicts the distribution of working hours for individuals from 1998 to 2004, complemented by a table presenting [1] the average number of paid holidays during the same period [2] .
In terms of [3] working hours, a noticeable surge was observed in the cohorts [4] working 16 to 31 hours and 32 to 45 hours, with a concurrent decline [5] in individuals working more than 45 hours. As regards paid holidays, a progressive increase [5] was evident over the years.
Specifically [6] , the number of people engaged in 16 to 31 hours of work witnessed substantial growth, surging [7] from an initial 10 million to 12 million by 2004, surpassing [8] those working 32 to 45 hours. In contrast, individuals working more than 45 hours experienced a decline from 9.5 million at the outset [9] to 9 million by the end, with intermittent fluctuations [10] .
In 1998, the average number of paid holidays stood at 25 days, climbing to 30 days in the initial years of the 21st century. The trend continued, reaching 32 days in both 2003 and 2004.
[1] complemented by a table presenting意为“并辅以一张表，显示了……”，这个表达可用于连接两个不同的图形，presenting后接名词短语。
[2] during the same period意为“同时期”，代指from 1998 to 2004。
[3] In terms of与本段最后一句的as regards意思和功能相近，都意为“关于”，用来引出一个新的方向或类别。
[4] cohort n. （有共同特点或举止类同的）一群人
working 16 to 31 hours and 32 to 45 hours修饰cohorts，意思是“工作时间为16小时~ 31小时和32小时~45小时的人群”。
[5] a concurrent decline和a progressive increase结构相似，都由“形容词 + 表示升降的名词”构成，前者意为“同时下降”，后者意为“逐渐递增”。
[6] specifically adv. 具体而言
[7] surge v. 急剧上升
[8] surpass v. （正式用语）超过
[9] at the outset相当于at the beginning，代指1998年，与by the end前后对应。
[10] with intermittent fluctuations 伴有间歇性波动
线图描绘了1998年至2004年间个人工作时间的分布情况，并辅以一张表，显示了同期带薪假期的平均天数。
就工作时间而言，工作时间为16小时~31小时和32小时~45小时的人群上升尤为明显，同时，工作时间超过45小时的人有所下降。关于带薪假期，多年来出现了逐步增加的趋势。
具体而言，从事16小时~31小时工作的人数大幅增长，从最初的1000万激增到2004年的1200万，超过了工作32小时~45小时的人数。相比之下，工作时间超过45小时的人从一开始的950万下降到最后的900万，并伴有间歇性波动。
1998年，带薪假期的平均天数为25天，在21世纪的最初几年攀升至30天。这一趋势还在继续，在2003年和2004年都达到了32天。