Part I
Writing

·审题·

作文要求考生设想自己参加了一次职业规划研讨会，写一份研讨会的报告，并总结自己从中学到的东西。该作文属于情景式作文，即题目设置了一个情景，要求考生按照情景完成作文。这类作文应注意紧扣情景内容，合理展开联想，然后下笔成文。

·参考范文＆点评·

On March 12, 2023, I participated in a career planning seminar, which consisted of three parts—alumni experience sharing, interactive discussions, and a Q＆A session. ¹

To begin with, some alumni shared with us their personal experiences about job hunting and offered us some insightful tips on exploring career options.I was quite impressed by one alumnus' clear career plan, various hard and soft skills and excellent internship experience. ² Secondly, the seminar included interactive discussions where employers from various enterprises discussed job trends, which were vital to the success of long-term career planning. ³ In the following Q＆A session, alumni and employers enthusiastically answered plenty of questions about career planning. ⁴

In conclusion, the seminar, to a large extent, has helped me realize the necessity of career planning. ⁵ Undoubtedly, we should attach great importance to planning our career, acquiring diverse skills, gaining internship experience, and keeping up with the latest job trends. ⁶ Only in this way can we achieve a long-term career success. ⁷

1 首先根据作文题目要求，从总体上介绍参加职业规划研讨会的相关情况。

2 分三点叙述职业规划研讨会的三个环节，先介绍校友分享环节。

3 介绍职业规划研讨会的第二个环节——互动讨论环节。

4 介绍职业规划研讨会的第三个环节——问答环节。

5 总结职业规划研讨会给自己带来的帮助。

6 进一步指出自己从职业规划研讨会中学到的东西。

7 强调所学内容对职业成功的重要作用。

·范文译文·

2023年3月12日，我参加了一个职业规划研讨会，它包括校友经验分享、互动讨论和问答三个环节。

首先，一些校友与我们分享了他们求职的个人经历，并为我们提供了一些在探索职业选择方面有见地的建议。其中一位校友清晰的职业规划、各种硬技能和软技能以及出色的实习经验给我留下了极为深刻的印象。其次，研讨会还有互动讨论，来自不同企业的雇主讨论了就业趋势，这对长期职业规划的成功至关重要。在接下来的问答环节中，校友和雇主热情地回答了很多关于职业规划的问题。

总之，研讨会在很大程度上帮助我认识到职业规划的必要性。毫无疑问，我们应该高度重视职业规划，掌握各种技能，获得实习经验，并跟上最新的就业趋势。只有这样，我们才能获得长期的职业成功。

·亮点词汇·

participate in 参加，参与

interactive 互动的；交互的

job hunting 求职

seminar 研讨会；论坛

a Q＆A session 问答环节

insightful 有深刻见解的

consist of 由……组成

to begin with 首先

career options 职业选择

alumni（复数形式）校友

personal experiences 个人经历

be impressed by 被……给予深刻印象

enthusiastically 热情地

attach great importance to 非常重视

in conclusion 总之，最后

diverse 多种多样的

keep up with 跟上，与……保持一致

·写作句型·

1 I was quite impressed by...

句型意为“……给我留下极为深刻的印象”，是表达某事/某物/某人给某人留下深刻印象的常见句式。注意，在该句式中by可以替换为with，即be impressed with。

2 Secondly, the seminar included...where..., which...

句型意为“其次，研讨会包括……，这……”，对研讨会的内容进行了详细介绍。该句型包含两个定语从句，一个是where引导的限制性定语从句，一个是which引导的非限制性定语从句。作文中使用从句，可以体现句式的多样化，为作文增分。

3 Only in this way can we...

句型意为“只有这样，我们才能……”，是典型的部分倒装句式，“only+介词短语”置于句首时，句子应采用部分倒装的形式，即“助动词/情态动词+主语+动词原形”的形式。 3nbQF62uXkWdIEl5ZHdJpBt/YbYefVkMpKxhNY9ztKMtrXaoRE54YirUXFhyi9oF