Part I Writing

· 审题 ·

题目要求考生写一篇以“如今，培养大学生的团队精神越来越受到重视”开头的作文，考生可以通过提出看法、说明理由或举例子等方式展开论述。根据题目提示，作文可以采取以下布局：开头段直陈论点，总述培养团队精神对于大学生的重要性；中间段列出具体论据；结尾段总结全文。考生写作时可以使用与“说明重要性”相关的写作句型。

· 参考范文＆点评 ·

Today increasing importance is being attached to cultivating college students' team spirit. There is no doubt that teamwork is indispensable for college students in life, study, and even in their future work. Cultivating team spirit has become an important element of quality education for college students. ¹

In my opinion, the importance of team spirit for college students is mainly based on the following two aspects. For one thing, team spirit has positive significance for the personal growth of college students. Learning to help each other and cooperate with one another cannot only cultivate the sincere friendship among students, but make them realize that the power of teamwork is infinite. For another, from today's recruitment advertisements, we can easily find that more and more companies are taking “good team spirit”as an important criterion for hiring employees. Compared with those who only focus on themselves, college graduates with team spirit will be more competitive and welcome when entering the workplace. ²

As the saying goes, “Great things may be done by mass effort.”Team spirit is both power and wealth. As college students, we should place more value on cultivating our team spirit and contribute to building a better and more harmonious society. ³

1 直陈论点——培养团队精神对于大学生至关重要。

2 分别从个人成长、就业这两个角度阐述团队精神对于大学生的重要性，由连接词for one thing、for another引出。

3 引用俗语，总结全文，重申培养团队精神的重要性。

· 范文译文 ·

如今，培养大学生的团队精神越来越受到重视。毫无疑问，对于大学生来说，无论是在生活中还是在学习中，乃至在日后的工作中，都离不开团队合作。培养团队精神已经成为大学生素质教育的一项重要内容。

在我看来，团队精神对于大学生的重要性主要基于以下两方面。一方面，团队精神对大学生个人的成长具有积极意义。学会互帮互助、团结协作，不仅能够培养同学间的真挚情谊，还能让大家认识到团队的力量是无穷的。另一方面，从当今的人才招聘广告中，我们不难发现，越来越多的企业都把“具有良好的团队精神”作为录用员工的重要标准。与那些只专注于自身的人相比，具有团队精神的大学毕业生在进入职场时将更有竞争力，并且更受欢迎。

俗话说：“众人拾柴火焰高。”团队精神既是一种力量，也是一笔财富。作为大学生，我们应该更加重视培养团队精神，为建设更加美好与和谐的社会贡献出自己的一份力量。

· 亮点词汇 ·

indispensable 不可或缺的

recruitment 招聘

workplace 职场，工作场所

quality education 素质教育

criterion 标准

harmonious 和谐的

infinite 无穷的

competitive 有竞争力的

· 写作句型 ·

1 There is no doubt that...is indispensable for...in life, study, and even in their future work.

句型意为“毫无疑问，对于……来说，无论是在生活中还是在学习中，乃至在日后的工作中，都离不开……”，常用于阐述某事物对于某一群体的重要性。

2 ...is both power and wealth.

句型意为“……既是一种力量，也是一笔财富”，通常用于指出某种无形事物的重要性。 jeo1jRLRuu3K9hceuNQExBaQQ5PnkOmAoBlsRTQhovuEgE9SB1YnFFMb6PhoCJGL