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本作文和2019年6月的三篇四级作文（助老活动报道、参观农场活动报道、希望小学之行报道）及2021年12月的一篇作文（收旧书活动报道）一样，都属于新闻报道类作文。根据作文提示，考生应就刚结束的教师节班级庆祝活动向校报写一篇报道。报道的内容应介绍活动的具体情况，可采用记叙和描写的方式来写。
Teachers are held in high esteem all over the world. September 10th, as we all know, is the Teacher's Day of China. This day is in honor of all those who devote themselves to the teaching profession. Schools and universities usually celebrated the Teacher's Day through organizing a series of activities. 1 Our class is of course no exception. 2
The celebrations took place in the early morning on September 10th. We were given the honor to invite all our teachers to the hall, which was beautifully decorated with colorful balloons. Upon each teacher's arrival, students roared and cheered. We sang and danced to convey our gratitude to teachers, which received loud applauds from the audience. After the performances, our teachers were besieged by flowers, cards, and gifts from the students in our class. 3
All in all, the Teachers' Day is a time for honoring teachers and recognizing the contributions they make to us. We should all show our respect for our teachers.
1 首先介绍教师节，然后强调庆祝教师节的重要意义。
2 自然引出自己班级的教师节活动。
3 本段详细介绍班级举办的教师节庆祝活动：邀请所有教师参加、学生欢迎教师入场、为教师奉上歌舞节目、为教师送上鲜花、卡片和各种礼物。
4 总结全文，重申教师节的重要意义，再次表达对教师的尊敬。
教师在全世界都备受尊敬。9月10日，我们都知道，是中国的教师节。这一天是为了向所有献身于教育事业的人致敬。学校和大学通常通过组织一系列活动来庆祝教师节。我们班当然也不例外。
庆祝活动在9月10日清晨举行。我们有幸邀请了所有的老师到大厅来，大厅用五颜六色的气球装饰得很漂亮。每一位老师到来，学生们都向他们欢呼致意。我们用歌舞表达对老师的感激之情，得到了现场观众的热烈掌声。演出结束后，老师们被我们班同学送来的鲜花、卡片和礼物团团围住。
总之，教师节是一个向老师致敬，承认他们对我们所做贡献的日子。我们每个人都应该表达对老师的尊敬。
hold sb. in high esteem 非常尊敬某人
a series of 一系列
convey one's gratitude to 向……表达感激
in honor of 向……致敬；纪念……
be no exception 不例外
applaud 喝彩；掌声
devote oneself to 致力于；献身于
roar 大声呼喊
be besieged by 被……团团围住
profession 职业
cheer 欢呼
all in all 总之
1 ...are held in high esteem all over the world.
句型意为“……在全世界都备受尊敬”，是表示某人或某事物在全世界备受尊敬的常见句式。
2 We were given the honor to invite... to..., which...
句型意为“我们有幸邀请了……来到……，这……”，这是礼貌得体地表达邀请到某人来到某处的常见句型。其中which引导非限制性定语从句，补充说明前面的内容。
3 After the performances, ... were besieged by flowers, cards, and gifts from...
句型意为“表演之后，……被鲜花、卡片及来自……的礼物团团围住”，是比较生动的句式，适合形容某活动结束后，某人被鲜花、礼物簇拥的场景。
民间的 folk
俗称 commonly known as
无疑 certainly; undoubtedly
习俗 custom
表达 express
与……联系 keep in touch with; connect with
长辈 elders
亲朋好友 relatives and friends
发红包 send red envelopes
用户 users
According to traditional Chinese folk customs, elders usually give red envelopes, commonly known as “lucky money”, to children during the Spring Festival to express good wishes for them and wish them good luck. Nowadays, red envelopes are not only gifts for children, but also often gifts for elders or relatives and friends. In recent years, red envelopes on WeChat have become more popular as the number of WeChat users has increased. When celebrating the Spring Festival, people often send red envelopes to each other on WeChat to express greetings. It's certainly a convenient way to keep in touch with relatives and friends far away.
1. 第一句： 本句较长，主干为“春节期间长辈通常会给孩子发红包”，翻译为elders usually give red envelopes to children during the Spring Festival；“俗称发压岁钱”处理为非谓语动词短语，充当插入语，补充说明“发红包”，应翻译为commonly known as “lucky money”；“以表达对孩子的祝福，祝他们好运”表示目的，应翻译为目的状语，即to express good wishes for them and wish them good luck；“按照中国民间的传统习俗”充当状语，修饰整个句子，“按照”翻译为短语according to即可，“中国民间的传统习俗”根据英文表达习惯应翻译为traditional Chinese folk customs。
2. 第二句： 本句中含有“不仅……而且……”的并列结构，需翻译为not only...but also...，故“不仅是给孩子的礼物，而且经常也是给长辈或亲朋好友的礼物”翻译为are not only gifts for children, but also often gifts for elders or relatives and friends。
3. 第三句： 主干“微信红包变得愈加流行”翻译为red envelopes on WeChat have become more popular，注意“愈加”表示“更加”，应翻译为比较级；“随着微信用户数量的增加”表示时间，应翻译为时间状语从句，as the number of WeChat users has increased；“近年来”在句首，翻译为In recent years。注意，“微信”的英文表达为WeChat。
4. 第四句： “欢度春节时”可翻译为“when+分词”的结构，即When celebrating the Spring Festival；“互发微信红包”翻译为send red envelopes to each other on WeChat；“表达问候”表示目的，翻译为不定式结构，即to express greetings。
5. 第五句： 句子主干是“这是一种便捷方式”，应翻译为It's a convenient way；“无疑”翻译为certainly或undoubtedly；“与远方亲友联系的”充当定语，修饰“方式（way）”，又含有动作的意味，故翻译为不定式短语，即to keep in touch with relatives and friends far away或to connect with relatives and friends far away。