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七 作文写四段还是五段?

以上提到的文章结构基本上是分四段或五段,那么到底写几段好呢?首先,考生需要明确衡量文章结构的两个重要标准:

●能不能把问题讲清楚

●在考场上有没有实战意义,有没有可操作性

那么四段式具有怎样的优势呢?

●四段式结构更清晰

●四段折中式比五段折中式好写,比五段一边倒式更好写

任何一个命题,正反两方面都写,比只说正方或者只说反方更容易达到250个单词。写一边倒最大的问题就是:40分钟内要写至少250个单词很难。

因此,四段式在考场上更容易操作,而且剑桥考官自己写的范文,大多数也都是四段折中式。

实例分析9

High school or college freshmen will always feel very lonely and depressed on the first day of school. In your opinion, what other difficulties will they encounter? As the school administrator, how will you deal with this issue?

Sample Answer 9

Every spring, thousands of boys and girls go to new schools to further their studies. Despite the excitement and novelty, they are always perplexed with difficulties of various kinds. In this essay, I would like to explore the phenomenon and offer some suggestions.

Firstly, they will encounter some psychological problems, such as homesickness, disorientation, anxiety, inferiority complex and inadaptability. Secondly, they may have financial problems. Some of them may not have enough money to afford the tuition and accommodation. Moreover, they may have difficulties in adapting themselves to the new teaching methods and teaching facilities. Some of them may find it very hard to keep up with other students. Above all, misunderstanding and disputes may arise due to inadequate knowledge of the local tradition and culture.

In order to overcome the above-mentioned difficulties, I think both the freshmen and the school administrators should devote their share to it. On the side of the new students, they should be fully prepared for their new school life, not only academically, but also financially and psychologically. Firstly, they should foresee the hardships and difficulties ahead and learn to be independent and self-reliant. Secondly, they should have a basic understanding of the new school and the local culture before they begin their new school life. Thirdly, they should maintain regular emotional contacts with family members and former classmates so that they won’t feel so lonely and can to some extent drive off their homesickness and depression. Last of all, they should actively participate in the school activities and try to be a member of the school community as early as possible. On the other hand, the school administrators and teachers should play an important role. To begin with, they should give care, support and guidance to the new students, helping them take good care of their life and study. Secondly, they should organize some activities requiring the participation of both old and new students, thus creating opportunities for the freshmen to get to know more friends. Thirdly, some special consultative offices should be established to solve the psychological problems commonly vexing the new comers.

In short, in order to enjoy a fruitful and colorful school life, the students and school administrators and teachers should pay special attention to this phenomenon. sbI7PHslUQl8blbg2szgEDjaVme+6ViBmCrHabYMbLjeOhzWC5yzj08lI8LtTWcv

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