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2.2 雅思大作文常见语法错误总结

2.2.1 冠词和名词单复数的语法错误

A.冠词的使用错误

冠词分为不定冠词(a 或者an)和定冠词(the)。

a.可数名词前一般要加定冠词或者不定冠词;可数名词如果使用定冠词,要么表示一类东西,要么表示特指。否则的话,要变成复数形式。另外一种可能性是使用所有格的形式。

不可数名词则无此约束。它们意思的区别见下表。

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例1:Computer is a machine for collecting,processing and presenting information.

错误:computer 是可数名词,要加冠词。

改正:The computer is a machine for collecting,processing and presenting information.

翻译:电脑是一台用来收集、处理和发布信息的机器。

例2:Government should provide students from low-income families with more support.

错误:government 一般用作可数名词,要加冠词,或者用复数governments。

改正:The government should provide students from low-income families with more support.

翻译:正确。政府应该给低收入家庭的学生提供更多帮助。

b.不可数名词一般不用定冠词,除非特指。可数名词复数一般也不用定冠词,除非特指。

例1:The education is important to one’s job prospects.

错误:education 是不可数名词,如果出现冠词,表示特指。

改正:Education is important to one’s job prospects.

翻译:教育对于一个人的工作前景是重要的。

例2:The parents tend to prefer boarding schools to day schools.

错误:因为是泛指所有的父母,所以不应该加定冠词。

改正:Parents tend to prefer boarding schools to day schools.

翻译:父母倾向于喜欢寄宿学校,而不是走读学校。

c.有一些形容词前面常加定冠词,比如说only,main,same,top。

例:People with same experience should be paid same.

错误:same 前要加the。

改正:People with the same experience should be paid the same.

翻译:经验相同的人应该工资相同。

d.序数词和形容词最高级前要加定冠词。

例1:Tourism has become the top earner of foreign currency for many countries since late twentieth century.

错误:twentieth 这个序数词前要用the。

改正:Tourism has become the top earner of foreign currency for many countries since the late twentieth century.

翻译:自从20 世纪后期开始,旅游业已经成为很多国家赚取外汇的首要手段。

例2:The cigarette is most common method of smoking tobacco.

错误:most common是形容词最高级形式,所以most前要加the。

改正:The cigarette is the most common method of smoking tobacco.

翻译:纸烟是吸食烟草的最普遍方式。

e.有一些词虽然以元音字母开头,却要用不定冠词a。如unique,university,union,European,而另一些词虽然以辅音字母开头,却要用不定冠词an,如hour,honour。

例:An university is an institution where students study for degrees.

错误:university 前不能加an。

改正:A university is an institution where students study for degrees.

翻译:大学是学生通过学习获得学位的地方。

B.名词的单复数问题

a.有一些词或者短语后面一般要加可数名词的复数形式,如a few,few,a variety of,various,other,numerous,a number of,different,one of,many,several,these。

例:Smoking cessation is one of the likely factor that contribute to the development of obesity.

错误:one of 的后面要加名词的复数形式。

改正:Smoking cessation is one of the likely factors that contribute to the development of obesity.

翻译:停止抽烟是可能导致肥胖症的一个因素。

b.有一些词后面一般要加可数名词的单数形式,如any other,another,each,neither,either。

例:Many teenagers begin smoking habits due to peer pressure but not for any other reasons.

错误:any other 后不可以加名词的复数形式。

改正:Many teenagers begin smoking habits due to peer pressure but not for any other reason.

翻译:很多十几岁的年轻人出于同伴的压力而开始抽烟,而不是因为其他任何原因。

c.有一些词或者短语后面一般要加不可数名词,如a little,little,less,much,a large amount of。

例:Little progresses have been made towards tackling poverty.

错误:little 后不能加可数名词的复数形式。

改正:Little progress has been made towards tackling poverty.

翻译:在解决贫困问题上,目前的进展甚微。

d.不可数名词没有复数形式。如information,knowledge,evidence,behaviour,news,research,waste,pollution。

例:There are evidences that rules can lead to children’s anti-social behaviour.

错误:evidence 是不可数名词,没有复数形式。

改正:There is evidence that rules can lead to children’s anti-social behaviour.

翻译:有证据表明:规则会导致小孩的反社会行为。

e.有些可数名词的复数形式变化不规则,不是仅仅加s 或者es。

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例:The datas are a valuable asset to the company.

错误:data本身已经是复数形式。

改正:The data are a valuable asset to the company.

翻译:数据对公司来说是一项宝贵的财产。

f.注意代词的单复数形式,代词he,she,it,one,anybody,everybody,somebody,nobody 都是单数形式,而代词they 是复数形式。

例:Anybody who does not save money for their retirement will have to accept a lower standard of living in later years.

错误:anybody是单数,而后面的代词是their。

改正:Anybody who does not save money for his/her retirement will have to accept a lower standard of living in later years.

翻译:任何不能为退休提前存钱的人都要接受晚年比较低的生活标准。

2.2.2 谓语错误

A.主谓不一致

a.动名词和不定式作主语时,谓语动词一定是单数形式。

例1:Raising standards of literacy are the government’s priority.

错误:句子的主语是raising standards,而不是standards。

改正:Raising standards of literacy is the government’s priority.

翻译:提高文化素质是政府的首要任务。

例2:To rear a child alone are challenging to any parent.

错误:句子的主语是to rear a child,所以谓语动词要用单数形式。

改正:To rear a child alone is challenging to any parent.

翻译:独立抚养一个小孩对于任何父母亲都是有挑战性的。

b.不可数名词作主语时,谓语动词一定是单数形式;如果主语是“...of...”的词组,谓语的数需要和“of”之前的名词保持一致。

例:The adequacy of financial resources are crucial to the operation of a not-for-profit organisation.

错误:adequacy是不可数名词,谓语动词不应该用are。

改正:The adequacy of financial resources is crucial to the operation of a not-for-profit organisation.

翻译:资金的充足对于非营利机构的运作是至关重要的。

c.当主语后跟with,together with,coupled with,combined with,as well as,like 时,谓语动词的数跟随主语变化。

例:Overworking,combined with a poor diet,lead to physical degeneration.

错误:主语是overworking,不可数名词。

改正:Overworking,combined with a poor diet,leads to physical degeneration.

翻译:工作过度,连同不良的饮食,会导致体质下降。

d.一些代词(anybody,anything,everybody,everything,nobody,nothing,somebody,something,each,every,none)后面的谓语动词一定是单数形式。

例:Even if somebody fall sick,everything go on as usual.

错误:somebody 和everything 后的动词都应该用单数形式。

改正:Even if somebody falls sick,everything goes on as usual.

翻译:即便有人病了,一切还是照常进行。

e.there be句型中谓语动词的数跟随其后面的名词变化。

例:There is a number of countries which perform poorly in containing pollution.

错误:主语是countries,谓语动词应该用复数形式。

改正:There are a number of countries which perform poorly in containing pollution.

翻译:有不少国家在控制污染上表现很差。

f.由what,whether,how,that,where 引导的主语从句中,谓语动词常用单数形式。

例:How we cope with massive technological change in the 21st century are an interesting issue.

错误:how 引导的主语从句后的谓语动词用单数形式。

改正:How we cope with massive technological change in the 21st century is an interesting issue.

翻译:我们如何处理21 世纪的大规模技术变化是一个有趣的问题。

B.情态动词的使用错误

a.使用情态动词(can,could,must,need,may,might 等)时,需要注意它们意义上的区别。

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例:Children’s confidence should be shaken if they are not given adequate support.

错误:“小孩的信心”不是“一定”被动摇。

改正:Children’s confidence can be shaken if they are not given adequate support.

翻译:小孩的信心可能被动摇,如果他们没有被给予足够的支持。

b.情态动词后面只加动词原形。

例1:This trend can persisted for years.

错误:情态动词后面一般只加动词原形。

改正:This trend can persist for years.

翻译:这个潮流能持续很久。

例2:Clothes for travel should was lightweight and practical.

错误:was的原形应该是be。

改正:Clothes for travel should be lightweight and practical.

翻译:旅游用的衣服应该轻便和实用。

c.如果情态动词后是被动语态,动词应该是be done的形式。

例:Environmental problems should be solve as soon as possible.

错误:被动语态应该是should be solved。

改正:Environmental problems should be solved as soon as possible.

翻译:环境问题应该尽快解决。

C.助动词的使用错误

a.助动词使用时需要符合下表的搭配。不难发现,当be,been,being 出现时,后接的动词不是原形,而是动词的现在分词或者过去分词形式。

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例1:A country should be balance the budget each year.

错误:be 动词后不可以加balance 的动词原形。

改正:A country should balance the budget each year.

翻译:一个国家每一年都必须平衡开支。

例2:Teachers are always play an important role in formal education.

错误:be 动词后不可以加play 的动词原形。

改正:Teachers always play an important role in formal education.

翻译:老师总是要在正式教育中扮演一个重要的角色。

b.初学者需要不断参考前面的表格,确保谓语动词完整。

例:One of the many benefits of travelling overseas learning how to cope with the unexpected.

错误:这句话并没有谓语动词,learning 是现在分词,不能构成完整的谓语动词。

改正:One of the many benefits of travelling overseas is learning how to cope with the unexpected.

翻译:去外国旅行的众多好处中的一个,是学习如何处理突发事件。

c.下面是几种常用时态的区别。在雅思大作文中,很少出现过去时,主要是现在时和将来时。

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例:This incident reflected the decline of team sports in today’s universities.

错误:如果是一般过去时,就意味着和现在已经没有联系和影响。

改正:This incident has reflected the decline of team sports in today’s universities.

翻译:这个事件反映了在当今大学里团体体育运动的衰落。

d.很多充当时间状语的副词或者短语提示句子的时态。

例:During the last decade,there was much discussion and controversy over the impact of global economic integration.

错误:时间状语是during the last decade,提示句子需要用现在完成时。

改正:During the last decade,there has been much discussion and controversy over the impact of global economic integration.

翻译:在过去十年里,有很多讨论和争论是关于国际经济一体化的影响。

e.has/have有可能是助动词,用于完成时;也可能是实义动词,表示“有”。

例:Obesity has a problem to many Americans for decades.

错误:has 在这里是“有”的意思,“肥胖有问题”,明显不恰当。

改正:Obesity has been a problem to many Americans for decades.

翻译:几十年来,肥胖对于很多美国人来说,都是一个问题。

2.2.3 词性的错误

A.主语一般由名词或者具备名词性质的短语、词语或者从句充当,而动词不可以充当主语

例:Give children a comfortable home environment is parents’ duty.

错误:give是一个动词,不能充当句子的主语。

改正:Parents’ duty is to give children a comfortable home environment.

翻译:父母的责任是给孩子一个舒适的家庭环境。

B.宾语一般由名词或者具备名词性质的短语、词语或者从句充当,而动词不可以充当宾语

一些动词,如continue,start,pretend,intend,attempt,decide,learn,后面经常加动词不定式作为宾语。

例:Many rural residents have decided move to cities.

错误:move是动词,不能充当decide的宾语。

改正:Many rural residents have decided to move to cities.

翻译:很多农村的居民已经决定搬到城市。

C.不及物动词和系动词没有被动语态

不及物动词后不能直接加任何名词或者名词性质的成分作宾语;如果要加宾语,则要加介词;不及物动词没有被动语态,如happen,appear,disappear,rise,emerge,occur,take place 等词都没有被动语态。

例1:The accident was similar to the one that was happened last year.

错误:happen 是不及物动词,没有被动语态。

改正:The accident was similar to the one that happened last year.

翻译:这个事故和去年发生的那个类似。

例2:I disagree many points made by the supporters of globalisation.

错误:disagree 是不及物动词,不能直接加宾语points。

改正:I disagree with many points made by the supporters of globalisation.

翻译:我不同意全球化支持者所提出的很多观点。

D.有一些动词词组如consist of,belong to,take place,benefit from 也没有被动语态

例:The curriculum is consisted of core courses and optional courses.

错误:consist of没有被动语态。

改正:The curriculum consists of core courses and optional courses.

翻译:教学大纲由主课和选修课组成。

E.准系动词如seem,remain,prove,appear,look,smell,taste 等一般不用被动语态

例1:Most children are seemed to be better at remembering bad habits,instead of good ones.

错误:seem 是系动词,没有被动语态。

改正:Most children seem to be better at remembering bad habits,instead of good ones.

翻译:大部分孩子看来都比较容易记得坏习惯,而不是好习惯。

例2:Teamwork has been proven effective in improving students’ performance.

错误:prove 是系动词,没有被动语态。

改正:Teamwork has proven effective in improving students’ performance.

翻译:团队工作在提高学生表现方面已经被证明是有效的。

F.及物动词的使用错误

a.及物动词后一定要加名词或者名词性质的成分作宾语,构成主语+谓语动词+宾语的基本句型;否则就是错误的。

例1:I will discuss in some detail.

错误:discuss 是及物动词,后面必须有宾语,而in some detail只是状语。

改正:I will discuss this topic in some detail.

翻译:我会比较详细地讨论这个话题。

例2:In many countries,salaries remain unchanged and even reduce.

错误:reduce 是及物动词。

改正:In many countries,salaries remain unchanged and even drop.

翻译:在很多国家,收入一般不变,甚至下跌。

b.有一些及物动词后面跟宾语和宾语补足语,构成主语+谓语动词+宾语+宾语补足语的基本句型,如make,see,have,let,这些词后面跟的动词常用不加to 的动词不定式形式。

例1:Education can let young people to find jobs easily after they finish their education.

错误:to 是多余的。

改正:Education can let young people find jobs easily after they finish their education.

翻译:教育能够让年轻人在完成学业后很容易找到工作。

例2:Whether we like it or not,our families shape our lives and make us to be what we are.

错误:to be 是多余的。

改正:Whether we like it or not,our families shape our lives and make us what we are.

翻译:不管我们是否喜欢,我们的家庭决定我们的生活,让我们成为不同的个人。

c.有一些及物动词后面跟宾语和不定式,构成主语+谓语动词+宾语+宾语补足语的基本句型,如enable,encourage,allow,prompt。

例:Private sponsorship has allowed the academic community survive.

错误:allow somebody to do something 是固定表达,to不能省略。

改正:Private sponsorship has allowed the academic community to survive.

翻译:私人赞助让学术界可以生存下去。

d.有一些及物动词同时也是不及物动词,注意在语境中确定其词性。

例:Consumer confidence should improve,as it is crucial to an economic recovery.

错误:消费者信心应该是被提高。

改正:Consumer confidence should be improved,as it is crucial to an economic recovery.

翻译:消费者信心应该被提高,这对经济复苏是至关重要的。

G.介词的使用错误

a.介词不是连词,一般后面只接名词或者具备名词性质的短语或者带连词的宾语从句,因此不能加句子。比较容易被当作连词的介词(短语)有despite,in spite of,during,because of,due to,也不能加动词。

例1:Many smokers are unwilling to cease smoking despite they have knowledge of ill health effects.

错误:despite 不是although,不是连词。

改正:Many smokers are unwilling to cease smoking despite their knowledge of ill health effects.

翻译:很多抽烟者不愿意停止抽烟,尽管他们知道这有害健康。

例2:Many children depend on their parents give support.

错误:on 是介词,后面不能加句子。

改正:Many children depend on their parents’ support.

翻译:很多小孩依赖他们父母的支持。

b.to在某些情况下(如词组give rise to,contribute to,pay attention to,conform to,lead to中)作介词,需要加名词或者具备名词性质的成分充当宾语,而不是加动词原形充当不定式。

例1:Public disorder can lead to damage a country’s economy.

错误:to 是介词,后面不能加动词。

改正:Public disorder can lead to a country’s economic crisis.

翻译:社会的无秩序状态可能导致一个国家的经济灾难。

例2:There are many solutions to deal with the problem.

错误:to 是介词,后面不能加动词。

改正:There are many solutions to the problem.

翻译:这个问题有很多解决方法。

c.有一些词既可以作介词,也可以作连词(跟句子),考生需根据语境进行判断,如for,since,after,before,as。

例:Traditional buildings are desired sometimes,for the simple reason is that they are of commercial and cultural values.

错误:for 在这里是介词,不是连词,后面不能加句子,that they are...是表语从句。

改正:Traditional buildings are desired sometimes,for the simple reason that they are of commercial and cultural values.

翻译:传统建筑有时候是受人喜爱的,因为一个简单的原因——它们有经济和文化价值。

d.介词在很多情况下用法是固定的,考生除了熟背之外,好像并无他法,如aware of,damage to,preference for。

例:People have different attitudes for life.

错误:与attitude 搭配的介词一般是towards。

改正:People have different attitudes towards life.

翻译:人们对生活有不同的态度。

H.副词的使用错误

a.副词或者名词短语充当状语时,前面不能加介词。

例1:Students are more likely to do homework on the computer in today.

错误:today 作状语时是一个副词,前面不能加介词。

改正:Today,students are more likely to do homework on the computer.

翻译:学生如今更有可能在电脑上做作业。

例2:People can travel to and from duty in every day on foot or by bike.

错误:every day 作状语,前面不能加介词。

改正:People can travel to and from duty every day on foot or by bike.

翻译:人们可以每天步行或者骑自行车上下班。

b.副词几乎可以修饰所有语法成分,但是不能修饰名词或者代词,形容词只可以修饰名词或者代词。

例1:There are not easy answers to the problems facing this country.

错误:not 是副词,不能修饰名词answers,应该用具备形容词性质的no,等于not any,not one或者not a。

改正:There are no easy answers to the problems facing this country.

翻译:这个国家面临的问题没那么容易解决。

例2:A balanced diet is an integral part of a healthily lifestyle.

错误:healthily是副词,不能修饰名词。

改正:A balanced diet is an integral part of a healthy lifestyle.

翻译:饮食平衡是健康生活的重要部分。

c.副词一般很少充当表语,而只有形容词才可以。

例1:Young drivers are more possibly to have accidents than old drivers.

错误:possibly 是副词,不能作表语。

改正:Young drivers are more likely to have accidents than old drivers.

翻译:年轻的驾车者比年长的驾车者更容易出车祸。

例2:Cycling is beneficially to our health.

错误:beneficially 是副词,不能作表语。

改正:Cycling is beneficial to our health.

翻译:骑车对我们的健康是有益的。

d.副词在have/has been这个结构中一般出现在这两个词的中间。

例:The importance of education for one’s success has been long recognised in society.

错误:这里long是副词。

改正:The importance of education for one’s success has long been recognised in society.

翻译:教育对一个人成功的重要性在社会上一直都被大家认同。

2.2.4句子结构的错误

A.一个完整的句子不能充当另外一个句子的主语

在这种情况下,需要将其中一个句子改成从句,或者使用形式主语it。

例1:Students receive job training is important.

错误:students receive job training是一个句子,不能充当另外一个句子的主语。

改正:It is important for students to receive job training.

翻译:学生接受工作训练是重要的。

例2:Students receive job training can become competitive in the labour market.

错误:students receive job training是一个句子,不能充当另外一个句子的主语。

改正:Students can become competitive in the labour market if they receive job training.

翻译:如果学生接受工作培训的话,他们在劳动力市场上会变得非常有竞争力。

B.连词的使用错误

a.一般来说,两个连词不能同时用在一个句子当中,典型的例子包括because和so,although和but。

例:Although the crime rate is falling in many parts of the world,but violent crimes are constantly rampant.

错误:although 和but 不能连用。

改正:Although the crime rate is falling in many parts of the world,violent crimes are constantly rampant.

翻译:虽然在世界上很多地方犯罪率在下降,暴力犯罪仍然是非常猖獗的。

b.标点符号中,分号semi-colon(;)类似于连词,而逗号comma(,)不具备连词的功能。

例:Education has been made available to more people nowadays,however,many adults have some problems with literacy and numeracy.

错误:however 是副词,不是连词,前后都是完整的句子,因此不能用逗号连接。

改正:Education has been made available to more people nowadays; however,many adults have some problems with literacy and numeracy.

翻译:如今,更多的人可以获得教育;然而,很多成年人仍然有读写和计算的问题。

c.有一些副词,如however,therefore,otherwise,thus,hence,常被误认为是连词,实际上这些词是不可以连接句子的。试看下面四个准确的句子。

句1:He studied hard; therefore,he passed the test.(分号等于句号)

句2:He studied hard.Therefore,he passed the test.(句号连接句子)

句3:He studied hard,so he passed the test.(so 是连词)

句4:He studied hard,and therefore,he passed the test.(and是连词)

例:People like to think that being on a diet is healthy,however,there is considerable evidence to the contrary.

错误:however 是副词,不能连接两个句子。

改正:People like to think that being on a diet is healthy; however,there is considerable evidence to the contrary.

翻译:人们总是喜欢认为节食是健康的;然而,有大量的证据证明这是错误的。

d.多于一个的名词、动词、形容词等出现的时候,需要使用并列连词and,but 或者or。

例1:Smoking,drinking are banned in many places of work.

错误:smoking 和drinking 都是主语,要用连词。

改正:Smoking and drinking are banned in many places of work.

翻译:抽烟和喝酒在很多工作场所都是被禁止的。

例2:More people would prefer cycling,walking if conditions were right.

错误:cycling 和walking 都是宾语,应该用连词。

改正:More people would prefer cycling or walking if conditions were right.

翻译:如果条件适当的话,更多人会喜欢骑自行车或者走路。

C.句子残缺

a.从属连词(because,although 等)一定要连接两个句子。状语从句一般是由从属连词(because,although,since,as 等)引导的。

例1:Because it is not serious.Many countries do not take any real countermeasure.

错误:because引导的是一个从句,缺一个主句。

改正:Because it is not serious,many countries do not take any real countermeasure.

翻译:因为这不是很严重,很多国家没有采取任何实质性的对策。

例2:Some countries are not able to solve environmental problems.Although these countries have realised these problems’ devastating effect.

错误:although引导的是一个从句,缺一个主句。

改正:Some countries are not able to solve environmental problems,although these countries have realised these problems’ devastating effect.

翻译:有一些国家不能解决环境问题,尽管这些国家意识到这些问题的影响。

b.完整的句子一定要有谓语。

例:Tourism has instead of agriculture as the main industry in many places.

错误:instead of 是介词词组,不能充当谓语动词。

改正:Tourism has replaced agriculture as the main industry in many places.

翻译:旅游业在很多地方已经代替农业成为支柱产业。

c.完整的句子一定要有主语。

例:In China has more than 100 million subscribers to cable television.

错误:in China 是介宾短语,不能充当主语。

改正:China has more than 100 million subscribers to cable television.

翻译:中国有超过一亿的有线电视观众。

D.名词性从句的使用错误

a.whether 和that 不能同时使用。

例:The question remains whether that it was a serious love affair or a passing fancy.

错误:whether 和that 不能同时使用。

改正:The question remains whether it was a serious love affair or a passing fancy.

翻译:这究竟是严肃的感情,还是一时的好感,这个问题仍然存在。

b.名词性从句可以用how,what,why,when,where等词引导,但不能与that 同时使用。

例:Many people do not realise that how serious environmental problems can be.

错误:that 和how 不能同时使用。

改正:Many people do not realise how serious environmental problems can be.

翻译:很多人意识不到环境问题可以多么的严重。

c.that引导名词性从句时,从句一定是完整的句子,这和定语从句有显著的不同。

例:It is widely believed that people improving efficiency by using computers.

错误:improving不是完整的谓语动词。

改正:It is widely believed that people can improve efficiency by using computers.

翻译:被广泛认可的事情是人们可以通过使用电脑提高效率。

d.和状语从句、定语从句类似,名词性从句出现时,必须要有主句,否则句子不完整。

例:The fact that education is the key to a country’s long-term success.

错误:the fact引导同位语从句,但没有主句。

改正:Government funding is supported by the fact that education is the key to a country’s long-term success.

翻译:政府的资助基于一个事实:教育是国家长期成功的关键。 Cwjyq5JHnwf2ZrFMmEXwsZr1HhC/jmo+nZdBCTt7ZGOTnTfDza6a1cdmASjQs6/4

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