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题目要求考生根据图表写一篇作文,在作文开头需对图表信息进行简要描述,然后对中国在城市化方面取得的成就进行评述。根据题目提示,作文可以采取以下布局:开头段描述图表内容,总结图表中反映出的中国城市化的发展趋势;中间段分析这一趋势产生的原因;结尾段总结全文,并对未来趋势加以预测。写作时可以使用与“描述图表”和“分析原因”相关的写作句型。
The chart above demonstrates that China has experienced a fast urbanization process in the past four decades. The share of urban population in China rose from 19.39% in 1980 to 60.6% in 2019. It was a tremendous increase. 1
The following reasons may explain why the degree of urbanization in China has increased significantly. 2 First and foremost, spurred by the reform and opening-up policy, China has made remarkable economic progress. To pursue a better life and secure their children's promising future, a large number of rural residents migrate to big cities, which greatly increases the urban population and speeds up the urbanization. What's more, relevant policies have been implemented to make urbanization meet the necessary realistic needs of urban residents. Chinese government has been taking various measures to boost urbanization, to ensure that residents can enjoy improved basic public services and social security. 3
Undoubtedly, with the increasing pace of urbanization, the percentage of urban population in China will also rise steadily. China will absolutely make more achievements in urbanization. 4
1 描述图表所反映的中国城市化的发展趋势,并选取有代表性的数据加以佐证。
2 承上启下,为下文阐述城市化进程发展迅速的原因做铺垫。
3 分别由First and foremost和What's more引出城市化进程加快的两方面原因。
4 总结全文,预测未来趋势。
以上图表表明,中国在过去的40年里城市化进程发展迅速。中国的城市人口占比从1980年的19.39%上升至2019年的60.6%。增长幅度巨大。
以下原因可以解释为什么中国的城市化水平有了显著提高。首先且最重要的是,在改革开放政策的推动下,中国在经济上取得了令人瞩目的进步。为了追求更好的生活以及保障子女拥有光明的前途,大量农村居民向大城市迁移,这极大地增加了城市人口,加快了城市化进程。此外,相关政策得到落实,使城市化能够满足城镇居民必要的现实需求。中国政府一直在采取多种措施推进城市化进程,确保居民能够享受更加完善的基本公共服务和社会保障。
毫无疑问,随着城市化进程的不断加快,中国城市人口的比率也会稳步上升。中国必将在城市化方面取得更大成就。
demonstrate 证明,说明
be spurred by 受……的推动
implement 实施,落实
tremendous 巨大的
remarkable 显著的,引人注目的
take various measures 采取多种措施
significantly 显著地
migrate 移居,迁移
boost 促进;增加
1 The chart above demonstrates that... The share of...rose from...to... It was a tremendous increase.
句型意为“以上图表表明……。……的占比从……上升至……。增长幅度巨大。”常用于概括描述图表内容,介绍图表数据的变化情况。rise from...to...是常用的表达数据变化的短语。
2 The following reasons may explain why... First and foremost, ... What's more, ...
句型意为“以下原因可以解释为什么……首先且最重要的是,……此外,……”,用于从两个角度阐述某一趋势或现象产生的原因。
3 ...will absolutely make more achievements in...
句型意为“……必将在……方面取得更大成就”,常用于作文结尾段,展望未来,升华文章主旨。