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Part I
Writing

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·审题·

题目要求考生就“为什么要鼓励学生培养应对挑战的能力”展开论述,写作的话题为教育文化类。该作文属于情景提示类写作题型,根据题目提示,作文可以采取以下布局:开头段描述现象,引出中心论点;中间段说明原因;结尾段总结全文,重申论点。写作时可以使用与“阐述原因”“提出建议”“说明重要性”相关的写作句型。

·参考范文 & 点评·

In the past decades, with people's living standards rapidly improved, students of this generation usually live an affluent life. This, in turn, leads to a worrying social phenomenon: there has been a sharp rise in the number of students with mental problems. 1 Therefore, efforts should be put into encouraging students to develop the ability to meet challenges. 2

The reasons why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges mainly lie in the following two aspects. 3 For one thing, life itself consists of a series of challenges. Students equipped with the ability to cope with those challenges will be more motivated and inspired, which is also helpful for them to maintain mental health. For another, the ability to meet challenges can enable students to gain a high level of competence in handling other obstacles in their personal, academic and career life. 4

To conclude from the above, it is of great necessity for students to develop the ability to meet challenges. With this capacity, they will overcome every single challenge standing in their way and fulfil their ambitions. 5

1 描述社会现象,引发对于如何缓解学生心理问题的思考。

2 提出中心论点——应该鼓励学生培养应对挑战的能力。

3 过渡句,为下文具体阐述原因做铺垫。

4 分别从保持心理健康和处理各种问题这两个角度阐述原因,由连接词For one thing、For another引出。

5 总结全文,重申论点。

·范文译文·

在过去几十年间,随着人们生活水平的迅速提高,这一代的学生通常都过着富足的生活。这进而导致了一个令人担忧的社会现象:出现心理问题的学生人数急剧上升。因此,我们应该努力鼓励学生培养应对挑战的能力。

鼓励学生培养应对挑战的能力,原因主要有以下两个方面。一方面,生活本身就是由一系列的挑战组成的。具备应对挑战能力的学生将更有动力、更受鼓舞,这也有利于他们保持心理健康。另一方面,应对挑战的能力可以帮助学生在处理个人、学术和职业生活中的其他障碍时获得更高水平的能力。

综上所述,培养学生应对挑战的能力是非常必要的。具备这个能力,他们将会克服前进道路上的每一个挑战,实现他们的雄心壮志。

·亮点词汇·

affluent 富足的,富裕的

lie in 在于

capacity 能力

in turn 转而,相应地

consist of 包括;由……组成

fulfil 实现

a sharp rise in the number of ……的数量急剧增长

cope with 对付;处理

handle 处理

·写作句型·

1 This, in turn, leads to a worrying social phenomenon: there has been a sharp rise in the number of...

句型意为“这进而导致了一个令人担忧的社会现象:……的数量急剧上升”,常用于描述某种社会现象,引发读者对于某一社会问题的思考或探讨。

2 Therefore, efforts should be put into encouraging...to...

句型意为“因此,我们应该努力鼓励……”,表示向某一群体提出建议或鼓励某一群体采取某种行动。

3 The reasons why...mainly lie in the following two aspects. For one thing, ... For another, ...

句型意为“……的原因主要有以下两个方面。一方面,……另一方面,……”,是阐述原因的常用句型,用于从不同角度分析某现象产生的原因或为中心论点提供论据支撑。

4 To conclude from the above, it is of great necessity for...to...

句型意为“综上所述,……对于……是非常必要的”,用于总结全文,再次强调某事物对于某一群体或解决某一社会问题的重要性。 4teOzKEmx6pXfMrR2f1Th06mBcUcaWz34DYSb1S2GURIXODtppOq4Wjx8DxzkNtV

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