Now,we need to be looking for the relationships between these ideas.These could include similarities and differences:
现在我们将把重心转移到寻找这些细节信息之间的关联性上。关联性通常包括相似性和差异性。
If you mention all the relationships in the table above,you will score TA 9.Here is what the final answer looks like:
如果你能够清楚地阐述以上图表中信息之间的关系,你将稳稳地拿到9分。下面是最终的范文示例:
Paragraph 1 MF 1
Shown in the two pie charts are the five reasons students chose a certain university in 1985 and 2005.It can be seen that there was little or no change for suitable degree courses and teaching, but closeness to home increased, while sports facilities decreased.
Paragraph 2 KF 1
Looking at the rankings,it is noticeable that course suitability was number one on both 1985 and 2005.Also of interest,closeness to home had the greatest rise from number five to number two, but conversely ,resources dropped from number two to number three.
Paragraph 3 KF 2
In greater detail,closeness to home,doubled from 10%to 21%over this time period. In contrast ,sports facilities halved from 18%to 9%.The suitability of courses did not change at 35%,and there were minimal changes for teaching,which increased 15%to 17%,and resources, which in comparison decreased from 21%to 18%.
What you may have noticed is that the response does not focus on figures until Paragraph 3,and then figures are only used a little.Strong TA scores do not depend on simply reporting the figures,they come from pointing out the connections between the data.The information here is connected by phrases like:
你可能注意到了直到第三段作者才开始使用数字,且数字使用较少,因为得高分的窍门不在于仅仅复述数据,而在于指出数据之间的关系。数据之间的关系通过以下关联短语来体现:
VOCABULARY&PHRASES 词汇 & 短语
● A is equal,but B increased,while C decreased.
● Closeness to home had the greatest rise,but conversely resources dropped.
● Closeness to home doubled.In contrast,sports facilities halved.
● Closeness to home increased,and resources,in comparison,decreased.