科技类范文三
e时代的书信

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即使在大量的信息是用“电邮”、“爱特（@）”、“微信”、“陌陌”等来传递的年代里，写信仍然是表达真情实感最有效的方法之一。

▶ （A） 7.5分范文

Many people are worried that the traditional skill of letter writing will disappear from our lives because of the popularity of the Internet and mobile phones. However，I do not think that the skill of letter writing will be lost completely.

I accept that most people's letter-writing skill will become weaker because they have few chances to practise this skill . People today tend to interact with others with mobile phone，the Internet or other electronic tools for the convenience and high efficiency that they can offer. Also，many people，especially young people，feel that electronic means of communication such as instant messaging and video chat can bring them more pleasure than letters.

However，I would argue that people will still need to write letters on some occasions because letters help them to express their emotions better than e-mail and SMS. For example，if students write thank-you letters by hand and mail the letters to their teachers，their teachers are likely to feel more appreciated when reading the letters. Similarly ，on Valentine's Day，many young people prefer to express their love and affection for their boyfriend or girlfriend with handwritten letters ， which helps them to express their feelings more passionately and sincerely .

Like personal letters，formal letters will also continue to play active roles in our lives. For example ，when a customer feels dissatisfied with the product or service provided by a business，the customer can write a formal letter of complaint and send it to the business. This shows that the customer takes the matter seriously，and makes the complaint more likely to be resolved by the business than an e-mail complaint does.

In conclusion，I believe that the tradition of letter writing will not be lost completely because it can still help us on various personal and business occasions when electronic means of communication do not seem sincere or formal enough.

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许多人担心随着网络和手机的普及，传统的手写书信技能将会从我们的生活中消失。但我并不认为写信技能会完全消失。

我承认书信技巧确实会因为人们很少有机会使用它们而不断衰弱。在当今社会中，由于手机、网络以及其他电子产品的高效便捷，人们更倾向于使用它们进行彼此联络。 此外 ，大部分人，尤其是年轻一代认为像短信聊天和视频聊天等现代化交流方式比传统的书信模式要有趣得多。

然而，我相信在某些特定场合，人们仍然需要写信，因为书信比电子邮件和短消息更利于传递情感。比如，如果学生手写一封感谢信并且邮寄给老师，老师很可能在读信的时候更加感到自己的劳动受到了认可。与此类似地，当年轻人在情人节表达对对方的爱意时，一封手写的情书也能帮助他们更好地展现自己真挚、热烈的情感。

就像私人书信那样，正式公文也会继续在我们的生活中扮演重要的角色。例如，当一名消费者对某家公司的产品或服务感到不满时，他就可以向该公司撰写一封正式的投诉信。这一举措可以表现出顾客对这一事件严肃的态度，比用电子邮件投诉要更容易被公司方接受并处理。

总而言之，我相信拥有悠久传统的书信不会完全消失，因为它们还将在许多用电子书信显得不够诚挚和庄重的私人或正式场合下发挥作用。

▶ （B） 7.5分范文

Mobile phones and the Internet are so widely used today that many people are concerned that letters may completely disappear from our lives. Although I think this concern is understandable，I do not think it will become a reality.

The ease and immediacy of phone calls， text messages and e-mails make them attractive to people，especially to young and busy ones. An e-mail or a text message can reach someone thousands of kilometers away in a few seconds. The same e-mail or text message can even be sent to multiple users at the same time. By contrast ，it takes a letter several days to reach the recipient.

E-mails and multimedia messages also allow their users to share pictures and videos and makes communication more interactive and entertaining . Another advantage of e-mails and text messages is that they can be stored electronically on servers and mobile phones， while letters always need some physical storage space.

In spite of this，I do not think that the tradition of letter-writing will disappear. Letters，especially handwritten ones， have a strong personal touch . Letter-writing takes much more time and energy than typing and sending an e-mail on a computer or calling someone on a mobile phone. This helps a letter to express emotions more deeply than an e-mail or a phone call. Letter-writing works particularly well when we need to express our sympathy ， support or romantic feelings . For business or official purposes，letters can also provide the formality that is well-suited to formal correspondence .

In conclusion，despite the advantages that e-mails and mobile phones have in speed ， ease of use and storage ，I believe that letter-writing will continue to be useful for a variety of personal and business purposes.

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手机和互联网的广泛应用使很多人认为传统书信将会永远从人们的生活中消失。尽管我认为这一担忧是可以理解的，我并不认为它会成为现实。

电话、短消息和电子邮件的简单便捷与时效性对众多的人们，尤其是年轻和工作繁忙的人们具有吸引力。一封电子邮件或一条短消息能在短短几秒内就送达千里之外的收信人。同一封电子邮件或同一个短信甚至还可以被同时传送给很多用户。对比起来，书信送达收信人则通常要花上好几天的时间。

发信人还可以通过电子邮件或多媒体短信分享图片与视频，从而使沟通更加具有互动性和娱乐性。电子邮件和短信息的另一个优势是可以用服务器或手机以电子形式保存它们，而书信则总是需要一定的实体空间存放。

尽管如此，我并不认为写信的传统会消失。书信，尤其是手写书信，能传递一种强烈的个人色彩。写一封信要比在电脑上输入文字或打个电话更加耗费时间和精力。这让书信能够比电子邮件和电话表达出更加深厚的感情。书信往往在我们需要表达同情、支持及浪漫感情时更为有效。对于商业与官方目的，信件也能表达出适合正式信函的正式感。

综上所述，尽管电子邮件和电话拥有快速便捷、便于使用和易于储藏等优点，我认为写信对于多种个人与商务目的都会是很有用的。 GcY5+Rd+g2frzMHEzCPyemvKNmIUswLliFHFZysN71wKbXxteHtey645f6wNnhBj