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教育类范文七
Pressure on students is increasing and they are pushed to hard work in their studies at a young age. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
学生承受的压力增加，而且他们必须从很小就开始努力学习。你认为这是积极还是消极的变化？
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Students today experience more stress at school and have to start working hard at a young age. I think that overall，this is a positive trend.
Young students have better memories than adult students. They can gain a large amount of basic knowledge if they concentrate on their studies. The knowledge base that they build during this period can help them with gaining more advanced knowledge and developing more complex skills later in life.
Schools are also places where young students form study habits . Studying hard and trying to achieve good marks in examinations will help them to become more organised ，manage their time more efficiently and handle stress better . These will be essential habits and skills for their future academic achievements，professional successes and even a lifetime of continuous learning.
Admittedly ，high levels of stress are counterproductive to learning . Young students may find it hard for them to concentrate on their studies or to think clearly if they are under too much stress. However ，by frequently communicating with their children about their problems and difficulties at school and cooperating with teachers closely in educating their children，parents can help their children to relieve stress and reduce stress to a healthy level.
For the reasons mentioned above，it seems to me that a reasonable level of stress can help young students to achieve their academic potential. Parents and teachers should communicate with children regularly to help them to cope with stress. Also，schools should provide students with interesting extra-curricular activities to help them to reduce stress and anxiety .
词汇和短语
（标★的是本类话题的高频词汇或短语）
knowledge base （名词短语） 知识基础
form study habits （动宾短语） 形成学习习惯
become more organised 变得更有条理
handle stress better 更好地应对压力
gain more advanced knowledge 获取更高端的知识
developing more complex skills 发展更复杂的技能
a lifetime of continuous learning （名词短语） 终生的学习过程，有一点像中文里的“活到老，学到老”
counterproductive to learning 不利于学习的
★ relieve vt. 减轻（压力）
【搭配】relieve stress
regularly adv. 定期地
extra-curricular activities 课外活动
★ cope with 应对
【动宾搭配】cope with stress
★ reduce stress and anxiety 减少压力与焦虑
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■译文
由于学习竞争日益激烈，年轻学生在学校经受更大的压力而且从小就必须努力学习。总体而言，我认为这是一种积极现象。
年轻学生比成年学生的记忆力要好得多。如果他们能够安下心来学习就能获得大量的基础知识。他们在这段时间所打下的知识基础能为将来学习更高端的知识以及学习更复杂的技术提供帮助。
另外，学校还是学生养成良好学习习惯的地方。努力学习并争取良好的考试成绩让他们变得做事更有条理，能更好地管理时间及控制压力。这些重要品质和技能对他们未来的学术成就、职业生涯甚至终生学习的过程起着重要的作用。
诚然，过大的压力会使效果适得其反。学生在承受过大压力的时候很难集中精力学习或冷静地思考。 但是 家长可以通过经常与他们的孩子交流那些在学校发生的问题和困难，并与老师竭诚合作，一起帮助学生减压并将压力控制在健康能够承受的范围内。
基于以上的理由，我认为适度的压力能帮助年轻学生更好地开发学习的潜能。家长和老师应该定期与学生交流并帮助他们应对压力。此外，学校也应该向学生提供有趣的课外活动来帮助他们缓解压力与焦虑。