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本文为三段式写作，主题为“高科技对写作的影响”，同时可以涉及更广泛的话题，如：中国传统文化的流逝。
第一段|描述图画： 对图画内容进行描述。图画是一个小男孩和爷爷的对话，“爷爷，不用电脑我不会写字了。”书桌上有纸、笔和电脑，进而引出话题“高科技对写作（字）的影响”。
第二段|阐释图画意义： 本段采用原因结果论证法，分析科技的发展对传统文化，如汉字书写等基本技能的影响。现代生活中，人们过度依赖高科技，进而导致中国的传统文化可能会在商业化和现代化中不断流逝。
第三段|归纳总结： 作为中立话题的“高科技”是一把双刃剑，需要我们取其精华，去其糟粕。同时，学会加强对传统文化的传承。只有这样才能更好地保存中国传统文化。
① Almost no one can fail to notice the impact of high-tech on writing. ②As is symbolically indicated in the eye-catching cartoon , in front of a grandfather sits a young boy, telling his grandfather that he has difficulty writing with a pen. ③We are informed that he cannot write any words without the help of a computer. ④Not only is the implication meaningful, but instructive as well.
①几乎没有人能忽视高科技对写作的影响。②正如这幅引人注目的漫画所表明的那样，一位小男孩坐在爷爷面前，告诉爷爷自己用笔很难写出字来。③（通过这幅漫画）我们可以了解到，没有电脑的帮助，他写不出任何话。④这句话不仅寓意深刻，而且很有教育意义。
① What lies in this thought-provoking cartoon, or is “buried ” in the conflict of ancient and modern cultures, is clea r : rapid development of scientific technology will result in the loss of basic skills such as writing. ② There are numerous reasons responsible for this phenomenon, and the following are the typical ones. ③ First and foremost, a lack of consciousness regarding traditional culture leads to the lack of due attention to basic skills. ④Moreover, massmedia, such as radio, television and the Internet, might inappropriately propagate the benefits of modern technology. ⑤As a consequence, an increasing number of young people overly rely on technology; thus, age-old cultures may become lost in the shadows of modernization and commercialization.
①这幅发人深省的漫画内容，或者“深藏”在古今文化冲突之中的内涵，是显而易见的：科学技术的快速发展将导致写作等基本技能的丧失。②导致这种现象的原因有很多，以下是其中比较有代表性的。③首先，传统文化意识的缺失导致对基本技能应有的重视不足。④其次，大众媒体，如广播、电视和互联网可能会不恰当地宣传现代技术的好处。⑤结果就是越来越多的年轻人过度依赖科技；如此一来，古老的文化可能会迷失在现代化和商业化的阴影中。
①In conclusion, popularity of high-tech might prove to be a double-edged sword. ② What we should do is to absorb the essence and neglect the drawbacks. ③Therefore, when tasting the fruits of technology, we ourselves should also enhance the consciousness of the importance of traditional cultures and basic learning skills such as Chinese spelling and writing. ④ Only in this way would our Chinese traditional cultures never perish in the future.
①总之，高科技的普及可能是一把双刃剑。②我们要做的是取其精华，去其糟粕。③因此，在品尝科技成果的同时，我们自己也应该提高对传统文化的重要性和汉语拼写和写作等基本学习技能的意识。④只有这样，我们的传统文化才绝不会在未来消亡。
1. Almost no one can fail to notice... 几乎没有人能忽视……
2. the impact of high-tech on writing 高科技对写作的影响
3. the eye-catching cartoon 这幅引人注目的漫画
4. What lies in this thought-provoking cartoon, or is "buried" in the conflict of ancient and modern cultures, is clear. 这幅发人深省的漫画内容，或者“深藏”在古今文化冲突之中的内涵，是显而易见的。
5. rapid development of scientific technology 科学技术的快速发展
6. result in 导致
7. There are numerous reasons responsible for this phenomenon, and the following are the typical ones. 导致这种现象的原因有很多，以下是其中的较有代表性的。
8. a lack of consciousness regarding...leads to... ……意识缺失导致……（结果）
9. propagate the benefits of... 宣传……的好处
10. overly rely on 过度依赖
11. age-old 古老的，存在已久的
12. popularity of...might prove to be a double-edged sword ……的普及可能是一把双刃剑
13. What we should do is to absorb the essence and neglect the drawbacks. 我们要做的是取其精华，去其糟粕。
14. enhance the consciousness of 提高……的意识
15. Only in this way would our Chinese traditional cultures never perish in the future. 只有这样，我们的传统文化才绝不会在未来消亡。
拓展话题 传统文化