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本文可采用“三段式”写作方法，旨在揭露现代人过度工作可能会导致过劳死的现象，并描述城市人压力大及其所带来的健康问题。
第一段|描述图画： 开篇描述图画，一个年轻人牺牲自己的健康，每天工作24小时，进而引发人们对过劳死的思考。
第二段|阐述图画意义： 使用原因结果分析法，主要原因在于现代人对金钱的追求和生活压力所迫，以及难以平衡工作和生活的关系等。这些原因导致越来越多的年轻人以牺牲健康为代价拼命工作去追逐梦想。
第三段|归纳总结： 呼吁年轻人劳逸结合，注重身体健康。
① The drawing does mirror a not uncommon social phenomenon that is really thought-provoking. ②As is vividly shown in the cartoon, a young man has to work 24 hours every day and the death evil pulls him back. ③ Under this circumstance, hardly can he touch his dream. ④ Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning is as deep as the sea.
①这幅画确实反映了一个并不罕见的社会现象，的确发人深省。②如图中生动描述的一样，一个年轻人每天必须工作24小时，死亡恶魔将他往后拉。③在这种情况下，他几乎无法触及他的梦想。④画面虽简单，但其象征意义却如大海般深邃。
① Without a doubt, the metaphorical and impressive picture sets us an alarm that overwork is detrimental to us both physically and mentally. ② Why does such a phenomenon emerge? ③ I can think of no better reasons than the following. ④ To begin with , most corporations encourage their staff to work extra time in order to get extra money. ⑤In fact, the young have to seize every opportunity to make money, especially under the pressure of modern society. ⑥ However, many people might have failed to notice that physical health is of great importance. ⑦ It is hard to balance work and life. ⑧ Overload working is nothing but overdrawing life . ⑨ Were the situation to continue, we would pay a high price.
①毫无疑问，这幅隐喻性的、令人印象深刻的图画给我们敲响了警钟：过度劳累对我们的身心都是有害的。②为什么会出现这种现象呢？③我想不出比下面这些更好的理由了。④首先，大多数公司鼓励员工加班以获得额外的收入。⑤事实上，年轻人不得不抓住每个赚钱的机会，尤其是在现代社会的压力下。⑥然而，很多人都没有注意到身体健康的重要性。⑦工作与生活很难平衡。⑧超负荷的工作只不过是在透支生命。⑨如果这种情况继续下去，我们将付出高昂的代价。
① Life is shorter than you expected. ② Considering every aspect of this phenomenon, we should bear in mind that physical health is not only necessary but also indispensable. ③Therefore we ourselves have to take practical actions, such as having a trip during holidays and taking exercises after work. ④Just as an old saying goes, “ All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy .”
①生命比你想象的要短暂。②考虑到这一现象的方方面面，我们应该牢记身体健康不仅是必要的，而且是不可或缺的。③因此，我们自己必须采取实际行动，如假期旅行和下班后锻炼。④正如一句老话所说：“只工作，不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。”
1. The drawing does mirror a not uncommon social phenomenon that is really thought-provoking. 这幅画确实反映了一个并不罕见的社会现象，的确发人深省。
2. Under this circumstance, hardly can he touch his dream. 在这种情况下，他几乎无法触及他的梦想。
3. without a doubt 毫无疑问
4. the metaphorical and impressive picture 这幅隐喻性的、令人印象深刻的图画
5. sets an alarm 敲响警钟
6. overwork 过度劳累
7. be detrimental to us both physically and mentally 对我们的身心都是有害的
8. It is hard to balance work and life. 工作与生活很难平衡。
9. Overload working is nothing but overdrawing life. 超负荷的工作只不过是在透支生命。
10. Were the situation to continue, we would pay a high price. 如果这种情况继续下去，我们将付出高昂的代价。
11. Life is shorter than you expected. 生命比你想象的要短暂。
12. bear in mind 牢记
13. Physical health is not only necessary but also indispensable. 身体健康不仅是必要的，而且是不可或缺的。
14. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作，不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。
拓展话题 身体健康的重要性