6．每1000名节食的人中不同种族和性别的人所占的数目

The bar chart below givesinformation about the number of people on diet (per 1000 persons).

Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisonswhere relevant.

Write at least 150words.

Thenumber of people on diet (per 1000 persons)

【参考范文】

The column graph shows the number ofpeople of different races and genders in every thousand people on diet.

Generally speaking, women, both blackand white, are more health conscious than men, with white women being thelargest social group on diet. Among four columns, the one representing thenumber of black men on diet is the lowest, being about 125 persons in 1000, andthe column for black women indicates that there are 125 persons more than thenumber for black men on diet. From the graph, we can see clearly that whitewomen form the largest group on diet, being 300 in 1000, which tells that they pay more attention to their health than the rest of the groups, including that of white men, for there are about 180 white men on diet in 1000 only.

To sum up, we, from the graph above,can see that the number of people on diet is determined by such factors asraces, genders, and, what is more, the awareness of the importance of health,in spite of the economic and social differences.

【范文点评】

本文开头介绍了柱形图所描述的主要内容，第二段分析了每1000名节食的人当中不同种族和性别人群所占人数，最后一段指出节食人数是由种族、性别和对健康的关注程度等因素所决定的。

【闪光词汇】

·gender n. 性别

·healthconscious注重健康的

·indicate v. 表明，指出

·paymore attention to更加注意

·be determined by...由…所决定

【经典句型】

·Thecolumn graph shows...

·Amongfour columns, the one representing the number of...is the lowest, being about...

·Fromthe graph, we can see clearly that...

·Tosum up, we, from the graph above, can see that...

7．1962年至1992年北美父母惩罚孩子方式的变化

The bar chart below givesinformation about the change of disciplinary techniques used by parents in North America for children under twelve during the period of 1962 to 1992.

Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisonswhere relevant.

Write at least 150words.

Disciplinarytechniques for children under twelve from 1962 to 1992

【参考范文】

From this diagram we may see howparents in North America have changed their disciplinary techniques forchildren under twelve within a period of 30 years.

In 1962, the most frequent useddisciplinary technique is spanking, i.e., striking their children on thebuttocks with the open hand, which accounts for 60% of all the disciplinarytechniques. In comparison, this disciplinary technique is used far less than itwas 30 years ago, accounting only a little more than 15%. The parents’ seconddisciplinary technique is denying television privileges, i.e., keeping theirchildren away from television as a means of punishment. This technique hasdropped from about 40% to 15%. Lecturing, the third disciplinary technique thatthe parents like to use remains almost unchanged: from a little over 20%dropping to a bit less than 20%. The only rising tendency of disciplinarytechnique is time-out, i.e., a brief suspension of activity, or break.

To conclude, there is a sharp decreasein the use of such disciplinary techniques as spanking and denying televisionprivileges, while time-out is gradually favored by parents.

【范文点评】

范文首段指出1962到1992年间北美父母对孩子的惩罚方式发生了变化，随后详细介绍了不同惩罚方式在1962年和1992年在比例上所发生的变化，最后一段总结说北美父母更多倾向于用暂停活动的方式惩罚孩子。

【闪光词汇】

·spank v. 打…的屁股

·privilege n. 特权，优待

·i.e. adv. 也即是

·asa means of作为一种…手段

·suspension n. 暂停

·lenient adj. 宽容的

【经典句型】

·Fromthis diagram we may see

·Incomparison...is used far less than it was...years ago...accounting only alittle more than...

·Asit is shown in this diagram...

8．美国暴力和偷窃受害者所占比例

The bar chart below givesinformation about the situation of crime victims inthe U.S.

Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisonswhere relevant.

Write at least 150words.

【参考范文】

The above graph presentsthat in every age-bracket, there are more theft victims than violence ones as awhole. The number of both violence and theft victims goes down gradually.Children between ages of 12-15 are mostly the targets of thieves. The agedare less offended by violence of theft. Meanwhile juveniles are the mainobjects of violence. From the graph it can be concluded that children below 24are most likely to be offended by theft. The analyzed facts reveal to us thatthe American youngsters are living in the greatest danger brought about byvarious social evils.

Therefore, in orderto keep people, especially children far away from the crimes of violence andtheft, the U. S. government should take urgent measures to lay down strict laws.At the same time children themselves should improve their awareness ofself-preservation in daily life.

【范文点评】

在分析本题柱状图时，首先要弄清楚横坐标和纵坐标的含义，然后利用题目中提示发现数据呈现的规律，注意不要过多引用数据，以免造成数据滥用。该柱状图横坐标代表受害者年龄，纵坐标代表每一千人中受害者的人数。文章第一段描述了图表并归纳了图表的意思，第二段提出了应对措施。

【闪光词汇】

·age-bracketn. 年龄段；某一年龄范围

·juvenile n. 少年

·take urgent measures 采取紧急措施

·lay down放下；制定；铺设；主张

·awareness of self-preservation自我保护意识

【经典句型】

·The above graph presents that…

·From the graph it can be concluded that…

9．发展中国家和发达国家的手机购买量

The bar chartbelow gives information aboutmobile-phone subscription in both developing and developed countries.

Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisonswhere relevant.

Write at least 150words.

【参考范文】

As is seen from thechart, the mobile phone subscription in developed countries shows a steady butslight increase from 2000 to 2007 and then remains constant between 2007 and2008. Meanwhile that in developing countries experiences a slow increase from2000 to 2004 and then a great surge from 2004 to 2008.

There are at leastthree factors contributing to the change. To begin with, the developedcountries have a limited number of populations and therefore, the spreading ofthe mobile phone service is efficient and soon the market is saturated. Moreimportantly, the developing countries have a large population, and as themobile phone service becomes cheaper and cheaper, the increasing customerssubscribe to benefit from this service. Of course, the improvement of people’sliving standard of developing countries greatly pushes up the consumption oflife facilities.

In conclusion, withthe advancement of developing countries, an increasing number of people subscribemobile phones.

【范文点评】

此题是要求分析柱状图中发展中国家和发达国家手机购买量情况。本文第一段具体说明图表的变化；第二段列举了导致变化的三个原因。第三段指出手机购买量增加的趋势。

【闪光词汇】

·constantadj. 不变的；恒定的；经常的

·saturatedadj. 饱和的；渗透的；深颜色的

·benefit from得益于；得利于；因…而得到好处

·living standard生活水平，生活标准

·pushup增加；提高；向上推

·stimulatev. 刺激；鼓舞，激励

【经典句型】

·As is seen from the chart,…

·There are at least three factors contributing to thechange.

·To begin with,…More importantly,…Of course,… pj8kbBMjDzdf2lMhhQdFO/eLFwPA2LRxEVZ4MBFm6YyzykQAlXLscOtwry/vwuBl