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From: Charlotte Lynn
To: Isabella Wallis
Subject: Congratulations on Your Winning the Prize
Dear Isabella,
Congratulations! I couldn't be so happier to hear that you have got the first prize of Young Designers Competition this year. All of our friends are proud of you for your talent in and enthusiasm for the apparel design. Even though you have not received any professional training in this field, you made even greater achievement than those who have.
Now I understand that interest is the best teacher. All the efforts and time you spent on apparel design is worthwhile. You realized your value on it and also got happiness and satisfaction from it. Those are what really matters.
I hope you can insist on your original intention in the days to come. And I wish you would create better works. Congratulations again!
Faithfully yours,
Charlotte
寄件人：夏洛特·林恩
收件人：伊莎贝拉·沃利斯
主旨：获奖祝贺
亲爱的伊莎贝拉：
祝贺你！听说你在今年的青年设计师设计大赛上获得了第一名，我高兴不已。我们所有朋友都为你在服装设计上的才能和对服装设计的热爱感到骄傲。尽管你并没有接受过这方面的专业学习，你取得的成就却比那些科班出身的人还要辉煌。
现在我明白了，兴趣是最好的老师。你在服装设计上花费的所有精力和时间都是值得的。你在这里实现了自己的价值，并从中收获了开心与满足感。这些才是最重要的。
我希望你今后可以坚持自己的初心。也祝愿你能创作出更优秀的作品。再次向你表示祝贺！
忠诚的
夏洛特
1. I couldn't be so happier to hear that you have got the first prize of Young Designers
Competition this year.
听说你在今年的青年设计师设计大赛上获得了第一名，我高兴不已。
★ 解析：
句首的I couldn't be so happier to hear that..可以视为习惯用法，表示“听说……我高兴不已”。句中的get the first prize表示“获得第一名”，相当于win (the) first prize、come first in...。
★ 套用：
I couldn't be so happier to hear that you came first in the poetry competition.
听说你在诗歌比赛中取得了第一名，我高兴不已。
I couldn't be so happier to hear that you were awarded a medal for your contribution to the company.
听说你因为对公司的贡献而获得了一枚奖章，我高兴不已。
I couldn't be so happier to hear that you are in line for the Laurel Prize.
听说你有望得到桂冠奖，我高兴不已。
2. I hope you can insist on your original intention in the days to come.
我希望你今后可以坚持自己的初心。
★ 解析：
句首的I hope you can...in the days to come.可以视为习惯用法，表示“我希望你今后可以……”。其中的I hope...后可以接省略了引导词that的宾语从句，表示“我希望……”，相当于I wish...、I expect...、I anticipate...。句末的in the days to come可以视为固定用法，表示“今后，将来，在未来的日子里”。
★ 套用：
I hope you can achieve greater success in the days to come.
我希望你今后可以取得更大的成就。
I hope you can make greater achievements in the days to come.
我希望你今后可以取得更大的成就。
I hope you can work harder in the days to come.
我希望你今后可以更加努力地工作。
1. He took the palm by perseverance. 他靠不屈不挠的精神获胜。
2. He succeeded by will. 他靠毅力取胜。
3. His persistence gained him victory. 他的毅力使他获得了胜利。
4. Based on the annual evaluation, the board of directors decided to give you a bonus.
根据今年的绩效考评，董事会决定给你发一笔奖金。
5. He was awarded a gold cup in acknowledgment of his achievements for the company.
公司奖给他一个金杯，以感谢他为公司所作出的成就。
6. The company awarded Julia for her good work. 公司因为茱莉娅工作出色奖励了她。
7. Thanks to your excellent work, our turnover this month has increased by 20%.
由于你的出色表现，我们这个月的营业额增加了20%。
8. I was awarded the title of Advanced Worker this year.
今年我获得了“先进工作者”的称号。
9. I received a reward because I made an innovation.
=I was rewarded because I made an innovation.
我因创新而获奖。
10. She was fearful that the prize should escape her at last. 她担心最后得不到奖。
温馨提示
★ 例文写作要点：
1. 祝贺对方在青年设计师大奖赛上夺冠，肯定对方的努力付出与成就；
2. 阐明对方在服装设计上所付出的时间与精力、所收获的开心与满足；
3. 致以衷心的祝愿，并且再次道贺。
★ E-mail的问候语写法综述1：
问候语作为邮件的导语或是开头，通常是表示感谢或是说明发送邮件的原因。
例文中的问候语，是直接表明主旨，向对方道贺：
Congratulations!
祝贺你！
另以商务类的E-mail问候语写法为例，列举如下：
I'm writing to inquire about...
我写这封电子邮件，是想要询问……。
I am very much pleased to inform you that...
很高兴告诉你……。
I am writing in reply to your doubts about...
我写这封电子邮件，是为了答复贵方关于……的疑问。
We are pleased to inform you that...
很高兴告知贵方……。
With great delight, I learned that you would...
很高兴获悉，您将……。
I acknowledge with thanks receipt of your E-mail dated...
您于……月……日发来的电子邮件已经收到，十分感谢。
I take the liberty of writing to you to apply for...
我冒昧写这封邮件给您，是想要申请……。
May I venture to inquire about...?
能否冒昧询问有关……的详情？
First of all, I would love to express my gratitude for...
首先，我想要谢谢您的……。
In reply to your E-mail of..., I would love to negotiate with you about further details about the...
作为对贵方……月……日的电子邮件的答复，我想要和您协商有关……的详细事宜。
It has been a pleasure learning that...
很高兴获悉……。
It gives me great pleasure to learn from your E-mail that you...
很高兴从您的电子邮件中获悉，您……。
I'm delighted to hear that you would like to...
很高兴获悉，贵方有意……。
I must apologize for not being able to reply to your kind E-mail dated...earlier.
很抱歉，未能及早回复您于……月……日发来的电子邮件。
First of all, I would love to express my gratitude for your...
首先，我想要谢谢您的……。