Part 3

考官范文亮点句型

写作范例

A large number of first time offenders leave prison only to commit another crime and return to incarceration.

许多首次犯罪的人在离开监狱之后，结果又因犯罪重回监狱。

语境含义

1. offender n. 包含词根fend（攻击），常翻译成“罪犯；有罪者，犯法的人”。

词组 first-time offender 初犯；young offenders 少年犯

例句 The authorities often know that sex offenders will attack again when they are released. 当局通常知道性犯罪者被释放后还会再犯。

2. incarceration n. 监禁

例句 His incarceration for property offences overshadowed him. 他因偷窃罪而遭监禁让他蒙受阴影。

模仿造句

很多人拼命地赚钱，结果发现他们一点儿也不快乐。

Many people make every possible effort to make money only to find that they are not happy at all.

写作范例

I believe that this is caused mainly by a lack of rehabilitation while they are in prison and a lack of employment opportunities when they are released back into society.

我认为，罪犯重复犯罪主要是由于他们在监狱里没有改过自新以及出狱之后缺乏工作机会而造成的。

语境含义

rehabilitation n. 恢复；康复；（囚犯）获得改造。包含词根bili（能力），当描述“通过治疗和培训方式来帮助人恢复到正常的状态”时可以使用这个单词。

词组 a drug rehabilitation clinic 戒毒康复诊所；the rehabilitation of violent offenders 对暴力罪犯的改造

模仿造句

大学生无法找到好的工作的主要原因是他们缺乏与所选的行业相关的工作经验以及实用技能。

University graduates' inability to land a decent job is caused mainly by their lack of real experience and practical skills related to their chosen profession.

写作范例

There are a number of solutions that I believe we as a society must implement to fix this problem.

我认为我们的社会必须要采取多种方法来解决这个问题。

语境含义

implement vt. 实施；实践；执行。由前缀im（里面）和词根ple（满的）构成，原指“装满……”，后引申为“贯彻实施……”。carry out是与之类似的表达，表示“设法完成……”。

词组 implement/carry out a reform 实施改革；implement/carry out a plan 实施计划

例句 Due to high cost, the program was never implemented. 由于成本高昂，该计划从未实施。

模仿造句

我们的社会必须要采取多种办法来解决交通拥堵问题。

There are a number of solutions that we as a society must implement to fix the traffic congestion problem.

或者： There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with the traffic congestion problem.

同义句型：

…is due to…

……是因为……

写作范例

First, one of the main reasons for today's high recidivism rate among convicted criminals is the lack of proper and effective rehabilitation.

首先，当今罪犯的重复犯罪率高的一个主要原因是他们缺乏正确且有效的改造。

Most first-time offenders committing crimes again once they have been released from prison is due to the lack of rehabilitation whilst in prison.

大多数初犯在刑满释放后再次犯罪是因为他们在狱中没有改过自新。

语境含义

1. recidivism n. 再次犯罪

2. convicted adj. 证明有罪的；已被判刑的

词组 convicted criminal 已定罪的罪犯

模仿造句

大众健康水平提高的原因是医疗技术的发展和健康意识的增强。

The reason for the rising level of health in general population is advances in medical technology and an increased awareness of health-related issues.

大众健康水平的提高是由于医疗技术的发展以及健康意识的增强。

The rising level of health in general population is due to advances in medical technology and an increased awareness of health-related issues.

扩展句型

…are not given a chance to…or develop a deeper understanding of…

……没有得到机会……或者对……没有更深刻的了解。

写作范例

To summarize, offenders are not provided with proper training to ensure that they can find steady employment and they are not being given suitable role models that would show them correct moral behaviour.

总的来说，没有为罪犯提供适当的培训以确保他们找到稳定的工作，而且也没有为他们树立正确的道德行为榜样。

In prison, many offenders are not given a chance to retrain skills for their future job or develop a deeper understanding of correct moral behaviour but instead mix with other criminals, which only strengthens their criminal intentions.

很多罪犯在监狱里没有得到机会为将来的工作进行技能再培训，或者对正确的道德行为没有更深刻的了解；相反，他们与其他罪犯混在一起，这只会增强他们的犯罪意图。

模仿造句

很多大学生没有得到实用的培训以确保他们大学毕业后可以找到稳定的工作。

Many college students are not provided with practical training to ensure that they can find steady employment after they have graduated .

应当在道德行为方面给儿童树立正确的榜样。

Children should be given proper role models that would show them proper moral behaviour .

中学毕业后就决定工作而非继续上学的青年人也许会在职业方面进步更快。他们有机会获得实际工作经验，学习所选职业相关实用技能，同时加深对职业前景的理解。

In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work after school, rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly. They will be given a chance to gain real experience, learn practical skills related to their chosen profession, and develop a deeper understanding of their job prospects.

扩展句型

…is owing to the difficulty in/of doing sth.

……是由于……难以……

写作范例

Secondly, the lack of available employment for the average convicted criminal leaves very few options to allow them to reintegrate into modern society. When they are provided with few legitimate options, the illegitimate ones become much more attractive.

其次，由于罪犯通常缺乏工作机会，因此他们很少有机会能够重新融入现代社会。当合法的选择很少的时候，非法的选择对他们来说就会更具吸引力。

Repeat offending is also owing to the difficulty in finding employment after being released. As a result, many of them struggle financially which leads them back to crime, regardless of the consequences.

重复犯罪也是由于罪犯在获释后难以找到工作。很多人由于不堪经济压力而不计后果、重新走上犯罪道路。

语境含义

owe vt. 欠，owing to 因为；由于

模仿造句

由于大学毕业生缺乏工作经验，因此他们很少有机会能够在人才市场找到高收入的工作。

The lack of working experience for university graduates leaves very few options to allow them to find well-paid jobs in the job market.

人们反对禁止极限运动是因为它难以执行。

Opposition to a ban of extreme sports is owing to the difficulty of enforcing it.

写作范例

There are two effective solutions to the problem of high recidivism.

有两种有效的解决方法可以应对高重复犯罪率。

模仿造句

有多种有效的解决人类环境问题的办法。

There are a number of effective solutions to the environmental problems facing mankind.

同义句型

One way to tackle this is to ensure that…are given the chance to retrain with useful skills which will hopefully ensure them a job…. By…, it will help them…

一种解决方法是确保……都有机会接受再培训，掌握有用的技能，以确保他们……找到工作。这样可以帮助他们……

写作范例

One is to ensure that, through proper education, job training and rehabilitation, the prisoner is g iven a chance to reintegrate and succeed in society without resorting to criminal behaviour. By removing the main motivation for that crime to occur, you can drastically lower the chance that it will reoccur.

一种方法是通过适当的教育、职业培训和改造来确保罪犯有机会重新融入社会并取得成功，而不会诉诸犯罪行为。通过消除犯罪的主要动机，我们可以大幅度降低罪犯再次犯罪的可能性。

One way to tackle this is to ensure that all criminals are given the chance to retrain with useful skills which will hopefully ensure them a job after they have served their sentence. By doing this, it will help them reintegrate back into society and give them some means to support themselves financially.

一种解决方法是确保所有服刑的罪犯都有机会接受再培训，掌握有用的技能，希望能保证他们在刑满释放后找到工作。这样可以帮助他们重新融入社会并获得谋生的手段。

语境含义

tackle vt. 原指“阻截”之意，因此当描述“以阻截的方式处理……”的时候可以使用这个单词，常翻译成“处理；应对”。

One way to tackle this problem is to develop cleaner fuels. 应对该问题的方法之一是开发更清洁的燃料。

模仿造句

一种方法是通过再就业培训确保下岗人员有机会重新融入社会并取得成功。通过提升他们的专业知识技能，我们可以大幅度增加他们再就业的可能性。

One is to ensure that, through job retraining, laid-off workers are given a chance to reintegrate and succeed in society . By improving them professionally, we can drastically increase the chance that they will be rehired.

一种解决方法就是确保下岗人员有机会接受再培训，掌握有用技能，希望能保证他们找到工作。这样可以帮助他们重新融入社会并获得谋生的手段。

One way to tackle this is to ensure all laid-off workers are given the chance to retrain with useful skills which will hopefully ensure them a job. By doing this, it will help them reintegrate back into society and give them some means to support them financially.

同义句型

Another method of dealing with…is to have more supervision and checks in place…. This would prevent…from taking any chances to…because they are being so closely watched.

解决……的另一种方法是对……加强监督和检查。这种方法可以阻止他们采取任何……，因为他们会受到严密的监视。

写作范例

Another method involves close supervision of that prisoner once he is released into society. If the criminals knows that they are being watched and their every move is being supervised, it is much less likely that one of those moves will be an illegal one.

另一种方法是对重返社会的服刑人员加强监督。如果罪犯知道自己受到监视并且所有举动都会受到监督，那么他们就不太可能有违法的举动。

Another method of dealing with criminals who reoffend is to have more supervision and checks in place when they are back in society. This would prevent them from taking any chances to reoffend because they are being so closely watched .

避免罪犯再次犯罪的另一种方法是当他们重返社会时对其加强监督和检查。这种方法可以阻止他们再次犯罪，因为他们会受到严密的监视。

模仿造句

另一种方法是在十字路口的头顶安装监控装置。如果驾驶员知道自己受到监视，所有的举动都会受到监督，那么他们就不可能有违法的举动。

Another method involves installation of overhead cameras at intersections. If motorists know that they are being watched and their every move are being supervised, it is much less likely that one of those moves will be an illegal one.

另一种方法是对道路加强监督和检查。这种方法可以阻止驾驶员任何违法的冒险行动，因为他们会受到严密的监视。

Another method of dealing with driving offences is to have more supervision and checks in place on the road. This would prevent drivers from taking any chances to break the law because they are being so closely watched .

扩展句型

…be effective in…

……是……有效的方法。

写作范例

In conclusion, a combination of rehabilitation, job training, moral support and close and effective supervision would show a quick and sharp decline in the recidivism rate of today's prison population.

总之，如果将改造、职业培训、道德支持以及严密有效的监督结合起来，那么监狱里罪犯的重复犯罪率就会急剧地下降。

In conclusion, having training in prison and also close observation when offenders are released are effective in deterring them from reoffending.

总之，狱中培训和狱后严密监视是防止罪犯重复犯罪的有效方法。

模仿造句

总之，如果将倡导使用公共交通、征收交通拥堵费、倡导使用电动汽车结合起来，那么二氧化碳的排放就会急剧地下降。

In conclusion, a combination of encouraging greater use of public transport, introducing a congestion charge and promoting the use of electric cars on the road would show a quick and sharp decline in the level of carbon dioxide emissions.

更加重视安全标志是提高道路安全的有效途径。

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