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Part 1

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范文

A large number of first time offenders leave prison only to commit another crime and return to incarceration. Personally, I believe that this is caused mainly by a lack of rehabilitation while in prison and a lack of employment opportunities when they are released back into society. There are a number of solutions that I believe we as a society must implement to fix this problem.

First, one of the main reasons for today's high recidivism rate among convicted criminals is the lack of proper and effective rehabilitation. To summarize, offenders are not provided with proper training to ensure that they can find steady employment and they are not being given suitable role models that would show them correct moral behaviour. Instead, offenders seem to mix with other criminals and when your peer group becomes entirely other criminals, the results are fairly predictable. Secondly, the lack of available employment for the average convicted criminal leaves very few options to allow them to reintegrate into modern society. When they are provided with few legitimate options, the illegitimate ones become much more attractive.

There are two effective solutions to the problem of high recidivism. >One is to ensure that, through proper education, job training and rehabilitation, the prisoner is given a chance to reintegrate and succeed in society without resorting to criminal behaviour. By removing the main motivation for that crime to occur, you can drastically lower the chance that it will reoccur. Another method involves close supervision of that prisoner once he is released into society. If the criminals know that they are being watched and their every move is being supervised, it is much less likely that one of those moves will be an illegal one.

In conclusion, a combination of rehabilitation, job training, moral support and close and effective supervision would show a quick and sharp decline in the recidivism rate of today's prison population.

译文

许多首次犯罪的人在离开监狱之后,结果又因犯罪重回监狱。我认为,罪犯重复犯罪主要是由于他们在监狱里没有改过自新以及出狱之后缺乏工作机会造成的。我认为我们的社会必须要采取多种方法来解决这个问题。

首先,当今罪犯的重复犯罪率高的一个主要原因是他们缺乏正确且有效的改造。总的来说,没有为罪犯提供适当的培训以确保他们找到稳定的工作,而且也没有为他们树立正确的道德行为榜样。相反,他们似乎总与其他罪犯混在一起,当你的同伴完全变成其他罪犯时,结果就可想而知了。其次,由于罪犯通常缺乏工作机会,因此他们很少有机会能够重新融入现代社会。当合法的选择很少的时候,非法的选择对他们来说就会更具吸引力。

有两种有效的解决方法可以应对高重复犯罪率。一种方法是通过适当的教育、职业培训和改造来确保罪犯有机会重新融入社会并取得成功,而不诉诸犯罪行为。通过消除犯罪的主要动机,我们可以大幅度降低罪犯再次犯罪的可能性。另一种方法是对重返社会的服刑人员加强监督。如果罪犯知道自己受到监视并且所有举动都会受到监督,那么他们就不太可能有违法的举动。

总之,如果将改造、职业培训、道德支持以及严密有效的监督结合起来,那么监狱里罪犯的重复犯罪率就会急剧地下降。 KodutfJOArCQCqdAiiPTkULMLzcC4oY307ZV4YxVVVkJDf9TvWlPfesCOzFMPhij

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